FAMILY TIES.
Viewing comments for Chapter 54 "One Plus One Equals One.""ALL IN THE FAMILY."
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Comment from RGstar
Yes, I know this scenario well. You wrote it with good knowledge.
Always difficult when depicting sadness for it is something that sticks, as love does.
Good luck in the competition.
My best wishes.
RGstar
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Yes, I know this scenario well. You wrote it with good knowledge.
Always difficult when depicting sadness for it is something that sticks, as love does.
Good luck in the competition.
My best wishes.
RGstar
Comment Written 09-Nov-2017
Comment from Sharon Haiste
Wow. This one touched me.
I don't know if it's so much sad as just deeply touching.
Very nicely done.
Good luck to you in the competition.
Sharon
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Wow. This one touched me.
I don't know if it's so much sad as just deeply touching.
Very nicely done.
Good luck to you in the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 08-Nov-2017
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks about the twins and work for them; work for one cannot help doing for both but there is always confusion, for both always one gets the benefits of both; I liked.
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This speaks about the twins and work for them; work for one cannot help doing for both but there is always confusion, for both always one gets the benefits of both; I liked.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2017
Comment from Zevona
I really enjoyed reading this poem. It creates much imagery and presents sadness in a unique way. The young boys are sad, but so are their parents. It is horrible feeling when you are told that your love is not being felt by your children--the ultimate sadness.
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I really enjoyed reading this poem. It creates much imagery and presents sadness in a unique way. The young boys are sad, but so are their parents. It is horrible feeling when you are told that your love is not being felt by your children--the ultimate sadness.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2017