Inspirational
He gave all he had to give, Life31 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Wonderful story. Thank you for sharing and commemorating with a poem. It's true that those who know and understand need better, often are more compassionate. Well worded lune.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
  |
Wonderful story. Thank you for sharing and commemorating with a poem. It's true that those who know and understand need better, often are more compassionate. Well worded lune.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
-
Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from sfharper
Compelling message about the measure of what is given to the world when one has nothing compared to what is given by those with much. Short and to the point. Good image.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
|
Compelling message about the measure of what is given to the world when one has nothing compared to what is given by those with much. Short and to the point. Good image.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
-
Thank you very much****kahpot
-
You're welcome kahpot
Comment from patcelaw
This is a lovely story and is so true. We remember the widow who gave all she had at the temple and it so impressed God that He mentions the story in His word. I read the story you mention in your notes. Patricia
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
|
This is a lovely story and is so true. We remember the widow who gave all she had at the temple and it so impressed God that He mentions the story in His word. I read the story you mention in your notes. Patricia
Comment Written 25-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
-
Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Irish Rain
This is perfection, and so wonderfully true. Some people are givers, lovers of others. I was reading about this story too, an awesome piece of joy. Blessings....
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
|
This is perfection, and so wonderfully true. Some people are givers, lovers of others. I was reading about this story too, an awesome piece of joy. Blessings....
Comment Written 25-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
-
Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Wow you are so right. Those that have nothing to little knows what it is like to need and they don't want anyone feeling that way. This is a winner
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
|
Wow you are so right. Those that have nothing to little knows what it is like to need and they don't want anyone feeling that way. This is a winner
Comment Written 25-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
-
Thank you very much and I agree****kahpot
Comment from mermaids
Your words have an impact on the reader. It is so true, those who have nothing, have the most to give, especially wisdom and encouragement. Excellent poem that is perfect for this time of year.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
|
Your words have an impact on the reader. It is so true, those who have nothing, have the most to give, especially wisdom and encouragement. Excellent poem that is perfect for this time of year.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
-
Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Dean Kuch
I'm so happy to learn that the woman who ran out of gas and was helped by a homeless man reciprocated and helped him out in return, kahpot.
That's never a given.
It's good to read poems like this one once in awhile. It serves to restore our faith in the goodness of humanity as well as to let us know that humanitarian efforts of the heart still exist.
Best wishes in the Lune Poetry contest.
~Dean
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
|
I'm so happy to learn that the woman who ran out of gas and was helped by a homeless man reciprocated and helped him out in return, kahpot.
That's never a given.
It's good to read poems like this one once in awhile. It serves to restore our faith in the goodness of humanity as well as to let us know that humanitarian efforts of the heart still exist.
Best wishes in the Lune Poetry contest.
~Dean
Comment Written 25-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
-
Thank you and yes we all need good news some times****kahpot
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Your words are poignant and so true, those who have very little are prepared to give all they have when a few pounds given by a millionaire is nothing, I liked your poem very much, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
|
Your words are poignant and so true, those who have very little are prepared to give all they have when a few pounds given by a millionaire is nothing, I liked your poem very much, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
-
Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Rasmine
Yes, good news. I can't watch the television news -- too depressing. I hear some of it on the radio; but why can't they tell about this kind of news you reported in your author's notes?
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
|
Yes, good news. I can't watch the television news -- too depressing. I hear some of it on the radio; but why can't they tell about this kind of news you reported in your author's notes?
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
-
Thank you and no the T>V> is a no!no for me at the moment****kahpot
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, it is a sad commentary on life, but accurate - easily spoken in gentle rebuke, smoothly conforming with the prompt - a beautiful image of our Lord's ultimate peace, in complement of this poem and its striking presentation...
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
|
In my opinion, it is a sad commentary on life, but accurate - easily spoken in gentle rebuke, smoothly conforming with the prompt - a beautiful image of our Lord's ultimate peace, in complement of this poem and its striking presentation...
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
-
Thank you very much****kahpot
-
You are very welcome...Eve
