Inspirational
He gave all he had to give, Life31 total reviews
Comment from RGstar
Often so, my friend, often so, for they treasure only the little they have so the little they give, is probably themselves.
Nicely said.
Have a great day, and good luck in the competition.
My best wishes.
RG
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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Often so, my friend, often so, for they treasure only the little they have so the little they give, is probably themselves.
Nicely said.
Have a great day, and good luck in the competition.
My best wishes.
RG
Comment Written 28-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Bliss A
That poem is on point, it is always those with little that give while those who can make a difference find that they can't be bothered to go out of their way. Thank you for this piece.
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That poem is on point, it is always those with little that give while those who can make a difference find that they can't be bothered to go out of their way. Thank you for this piece.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much, I some times wish I had more to give****kahpot
Comment from apky
This is not just an inspiration and a story, it is the truth.
Take the rich world and the poor world - basically we have
more than enough to feed, house and give shelter to 3 times
the world population we have now. But the rich would rather
not even pay tax, and own ca. 90% of the resources or the rest.
Great thought-provoking poem. Wish I had a six to give.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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This is not just an inspiration and a story, it is the truth.
Take the rich world and the poor world - basically we have
more than enough to feed, house and give shelter to 3 times
the world population we have now. But the rich would rather
not even pay tax, and own ca. 90% of the resources or the rest.
Great thought-provoking poem. Wish I had a six to give.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much, and yes we need to re-think things a bit****kahpot
Comment from dmt1967
This poem touches my heart and I like the pencil drawing as it symbolises what the words say. People who have nothing give, but people who have something hold on to what they have got. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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This poem touches my heart and I like the pencil drawing as it symbolises what the words say. People who have nothing give, but people who have something hold on to what they have got. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much, and yes we have the resources to help many, many more****kahpot
Comment from c_lucas
When we help others in their time of need, we are doing the Lord's work. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. Good story.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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When we help others in their time of need, we are doing the Lord's work. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. Good story.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much, and yes I agree****kahpot
Comment from kiwigirl2821
I like to feed people lol. I always make too much food and when I can I pass it around so others will eat. I enjoyed this one and felt inspired to say that. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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I like to feed people lol. I always make too much food and when I can I pass it around so others will eat. I enjoyed this one and felt inspired to say that. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 28-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Kahpot,
It's a nice piece of Self-Improvement Poetry meeting the desired norms and beautifully depicting its theme.
If read in the light of Author Notes, it becomes more inspirational.
Best of Luck!
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2017
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Hello Kahpot,
It's a nice piece of Self-Improvement Poetry meeting the desired norms and beautifully depicting its theme.
If read in the light of Author Notes, it becomes more inspirational.
Best of Luck!
Comment Written 27-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
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Kahpot, Most Welcome!
~ RP
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written inspiring poem. Yes, we still get those who are willing to give their all to others, they are very rare, but they do exist. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2017
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A very well-written inspiring poem. Yes, we still get those who are willing to give their all to others, they are very rare, but they do exist. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Natali Holden
Lol. For once! It's definitely true though. There are exceptions, but mostly. Your syllable count is correct. Good luck in the contest! I think the story is just about as good as your poem. It makes me smile to think about it. Your poem reminds me of the story found in Mark 12:41-44 and Luke 21:1-4. Thank you for sharing!
Natali ;)
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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Lol. For once! It's definitely true though. There are exceptions, but mostly. Your syllable count is correct. Good luck in the contest! I think the story is just about as good as your poem. It makes me smile to think about it. Your poem reminds me of the story found in Mark 12:41-44 and Luke 21:1-4. Thank you for sharing!
Natali ;)
Comment Written 26-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Poetic Friend
I agree with these sentiments wholeheartedly. The reason they have nothing is because they give it all away. I am definitely like the person described in your poem. I will give my last dime. My mother always joked and said that I would give my away my head if it weren't attached to my body.
Thank you for this thought-provoking short poem. Wow, it is superbly written.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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I agree with these sentiments wholeheartedly. The reason they have nothing is because they give it all away. I am definitely like the person described in your poem. I will give my last dime. My mother always joked and said that I would give my away my head if it weren't attached to my body.
Thank you for this thought-provoking short poem. Wow, it is superbly written.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much, and yes it is good to know there are good people out there****kahpot
