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Viewing comments for Chapter 33 "Winter's Seduction"possible selections for inclusion in book project
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Comment from BOO ghost
BOO's favorite quatrains: when you aren't looking
I blow a gentle
icy breeze
up your skirt
it tickles against
your hot essence
I grip what I seek
and your passion swells
in response
to my icy resolve
I feel cold. A remarkable presentation. She looks lovely. BOO!
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BOO's favorite quatrains: when you aren't looking
I blow a gentle
icy breeze
up your skirt
it tickles against
your hot essence
I grip what I seek
and your passion swells
in response
to my icy resolve
I feel cold. A remarkable presentation. She looks lovely. BOO!
Comment Written 05-Nov-2017
Comment from robina1978
A lovely photo that complements your free verse perfectly. It is a free verse with personification, and much more-like assonance. I enjoyed that you made it romantic without being vulgar. Best wishes for the prompt.
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A lovely photo that complements your free verse perfectly. It is a free verse with personification, and much more-like assonance. I enjoyed that you made it romantic without being vulgar. Best wishes for the prompt.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2017
Comment from nordicgirl
Gee, this almost makes me want to find a blizzard. He he he. This has to be the most sexy awesome depiction of winter EVER!
If this doesn't wib I will be shocked. Wow. NG
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Gee, this almost makes me want to find a blizzard. He he he. This has to be the most sexy awesome depiction of winter EVER!
If this doesn't wib I will be shocked. Wow. NG
Comment Written 05-Nov-2017
Comment from dragonpoet
Nice sensual personification of winter taking the land from us. It shows how we want to hang on to Spring and Fall but Winter finally comes.
Great artwork choice.
Good luck in the contest and keep writing.
dragonpoet
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Nice sensual personification of winter taking the land from us. It shows how we want to hang on to Spring and Fall but Winter finally comes.
Great artwork choice.
Good luck in the contest and keep writing.
dragonpoet
Comment Written 05-Nov-2017
Comment from samandlancelot
I love the way you entice the woman, win her over, but all the while you realize you can't keep her, because spring is always ready to redeem her, when your season is over. Exceptional personification.
Patricia
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I love the way you entice the woman, win her over, but all the while you realize you can't keep her, because spring is always ready to redeem her, when your season is over. Exceptional personification.
Patricia
Comment Written 05-Nov-2017
Comment from papa55mike
That's the first time I've heard the coming of winter has an act of sex. But it makes sense. The total takeover of winter that penetrates the land. This beautifully written and I love the sexy picture to drive the point home.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
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That's the first time I've heard the coming of winter has an act of sex. But it makes sense. The total takeover of winter that penetrates the land. This beautifully written and I love the sexy picture to drive the point home.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 05-Nov-2017
Comment from Ulla
Hi There, I really liked this free verse poem about winter. It is refreshingly different. A wonderfully sensual poem that also meets the criteria of the contest. I wish you good luck. All the best. Ulla:))
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Hi There, I really liked this free verse poem about winter. It is refreshingly different. A wonderfully sensual poem that also meets the criteria of the contest. I wish you good luck. All the best. Ulla:))
Comment Written 05-Nov-2017
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
This is a great piece of writing. The personification goes full bore here (Ahem). A cold lover's embrace but powerless to resist. Nice perspective.
All the best
GMG
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Hi there,
This is a great piece of writing. The personification goes full bore here (Ahem). A cold lover's embrace but powerless to resist. Nice perspective.
All the best
GMG
Comment Written 05-Nov-2017
Comment from Poetic Friend
This is one of the best personification of winter poems that I have read. I love the eroticism that you have expressed in this poem. The metaphors work so well in this poem.
The imagery and alliteration was also quite enjoyable ro read.
This entry is going to be tough to beat. This has winning potential.
Good luck in the contest.
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This is one of the best personification of winter poems that I have read. I love the eroticism that you have expressed in this poem. The metaphors work so well in this poem.
The imagery and alliteration was also quite enjoyable ro read.
This entry is going to be tough to beat. This has winning potential.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2017
Comment from Dean Kuch
Look, ye wraith. I nah wear a skit but a kilt, 'tis called. Keep yer bitter, biting breath to yerself, mate!
Afore ah make mincemeat ah ye!
Nice write personifying winter, Micheal.
Best wishes to ye in the contest, bloke.
~Deano
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Look, ye wraith. I nah wear a skit but a kilt, 'tis called. Keep yer bitter, biting breath to yerself, mate!
Afore ah make mincemeat ah ye!
Nice write personifying winter, Micheal.
Best wishes to ye in the contest, bloke.
~Deano
Comment Written 05-Nov-2017