Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very cute poem about Walri the Walrus. You used very cute descriptive words and very cute imagery with your words. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2017

Thanks, Teri

reply by Teri7 on 12-Nov-2017

you are so welcome!

Comment from kiwigirl2821

Excellent

Hi Bill. You look like you are still having fun with this series. Who cares if Walri is a word or not lol. It's a great vivid word that makes the reader think it isn't a word. Well done you. xoxo Kiwi

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017

Thanks, kiwi.

Comment from Possummagic

Excellent

Wel...poetic license and all that! These darned Walri... you cant trust a word that they say, even if you could speak Walri. The quirky ness of your choice of beasts and poetry appeals to me... what else can I say? Good luck. PM

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017

Thanks, PM

reply by Possummagic on 05-Nov-2017

You?re welcome. PM

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

If you are bold enough to get close enough you might smell their breath, although the smell might stink like death. The point would be to prove the lies, never mind the whys. Just prove they are liying, fish eating, bad guys

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017

Thanks, nomi, for responding.

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Hi Bill. This is amusing. The idea of them eating oysters while denying they're doing it is priceless. I do like made-up words. They add a bit of personality to the piece, especially since this post doesn't have an image to accompany it. Marilyn

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017

Thanks, Marilyn

Comment from BOO ghost

Excellent

a cinquain. This must be walrus world now. Who knows, maybe the neanderthals muttered walri. I always wondered who makes a word an official word? Some sea food may be in order tonight for BOO. Looks good to me. BOO-tastic!

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017

Thanks, BOO

Comment from damommy

Excellent

It's a word now. lol

You know how walri are. They lie every time. Apparently, they don't know we can smell oysters on their breath. hahaha

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017

Thanks, da

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Lol. Funny plural form. And I'm guessing they were walking with a 'carpenter?" Great use of literary allusion on this one as well as linguistic inventiveness and rhyming in the short cinquain format.

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017

Thanks, lyenochka.

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hehehe, you do make me laugh. Your ability to use made upwords is marvellous. I really enjoy your walrus stories. This is a great little poem. All the best. Ulla:))

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017

Thanks, Ulla.

Comment from Mitchell Brontė

Excellent

Another wonderful Walrus poem, Bill, I like the way you throw made up words in to keep us on our feet..............gave me a giggle this, ........
Mitchell

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017

Thanks, Mitchell