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Comment from Joan E.
What a terrifying video--how could that little girl manage to stand so still! I admired your echoing sounds like in "nurse" and "curse" plus your signature circularity. Cheers from Columbia- Joan
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What a terrifying video--how could that little girl manage to stand so still! I admired your echoing sounds like in "nurse" and "curse" plus your signature circularity. Cheers from Columbia- Joan
Comment Written 05-Nov-2017
Comment from Liberty Justice
"No count adulterers with good intentions" very interesting way of saying something negative and something positive about someone. Writer uses literary devices like metaphors to dramatize several convictions writer makes. lol liberty justice
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"No count adulterers with good intentions" very interesting way of saying something negative and something positive about someone. Writer uses literary devices like metaphors to dramatize several convictions writer makes. lol liberty justice
Comment Written 04-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
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I really haven?t got a clue what you?re talking about Liberty....however interesting . You are a blessing in disguise. Always Miguel
Comment from amada
This is a very strong work. I gather this is about child abuse. Difficult to write. And to realize that this happens in our so called civilized society. Kudos por posting this work.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017
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This is a very strong work. I gather this is about child abuse. Difficult to write. And to realize that this happens in our so called civilized society. Kudos por posting this work.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017
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yes.
yes well...is it is....it is
but through decades of Nero surgery and psycho analogies I can finally write about it.
and I ah boy plan too...aha...hey happy feet very funny. always Michael
Comment from Ricky1024
This was rich in semen imagery as well as adjective content objective content graced the descriptive measures which measure this is a deep and very interesting piece thanks for this doctor Ricky 1024 and wonderful November
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This was rich in semen imagery as well as adjective content objective content graced the descriptive measures which measure this is a deep and very interesting piece thanks for this doctor Ricky 1024 and wonderful November
Comment Written 04-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
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Yes sir I believe if I dig any deeper I?ll free China.....and be remembered forever. Wooo slow down. Always Michael
Comment from closetpoetjester
I know many of us can be made to feel worthless at sometime in our lives by others but the ones who forge new frontiers are those unafraid of all obstacles and who will stand up for what they believe in.
In their truth, or at least what they know and feel to be the truth...but *finger shake*...Opinions are like bums. Everyone's got one. But some of them AREN'T very nice haha
Come swim against the tide with me.
I have two life preservers haha
I'm kidding
You'll sink.
Love you're style. Please NEVER change. You are one of the very few unique entities on this website.
Sassafrasso
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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017
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I know many of us can be made to feel worthless at sometime in our lives by others but the ones who forge new frontiers are those unafraid of all obstacles and who will stand up for what they believe in.
In their truth, or at least what they know and feel to be the truth...but *finger shake*...Opinions are like bums. Everyone's got one. But some of them AREN'T very nice haha
Come swim against the tide with me.
I have two life preservers haha
I'm kidding
You'll sink.
Love you're style. Please NEVER change. You are one of the very few unique entities on this website.
Sassafrasso
xx
Comment Written 04-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017
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dont...o dont you tease me.....Oooo Oooo dont you do it ...dont..jus just dont
Oooo do it...jus do it. -handfan-..Ooooooo
-smile-..hello Sasserfrass.......you know oooo I wanna cut your grass so bad
you make me blush Dear...always Michael
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I never tease when it comes to talent haha
You have it in spades babes
Sassometer xx
Comment from MissMerri
Stephen, as I recall, was stoned for no reason other than speaking the truth. Even though God was surely pleased with his life and devotion to Christ, his life was not spared and the stones were unmercifully painful. "Reign hail or holy water," your name too, is loyalty and devotion to truth and will not change no matter how many stones hit. I admire your steadfastness and your courage. I sense deep loyalty in you and think this poem is a clear description of who you are, from the inside out, as well as the suffering you endure. Just as Stephen did, I can easily imagine you find your strength in God. In Him, you are "rock solid strong." I love the 121st Psalm. Thank you for mentioning it. This is a brilliant poem, but painful too. It describes courage in the face of pain and death, and steadfastness even though the path is narrow and forsaken by most. You are a brave poet, Michael. Please keep writing. (I listened to the song and wondered why anyone would "keep coming back for more." I hope you find her, my friend.)
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017
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Stephen, as I recall, was stoned for no reason other than speaking the truth. Even though God was surely pleased with his life and devotion to Christ, his life was not spared and the stones were unmercifully painful. "Reign hail or holy water," your name too, is loyalty and devotion to truth and will not change no matter how many stones hit. I admire your steadfastness and your courage. I sense deep loyalty in you and think this poem is a clear description of who you are, from the inside out, as well as the suffering you endure. Just as Stephen did, I can easily imagine you find your strength in God. In Him, you are "rock solid strong." I love the 121st Psalm. Thank you for mentioning it. This is a brilliant poem, but painful too. It describes courage in the face of pain and death, and steadfastness even though the path is narrow and forsaken by most. You are a brave poet, Michael. Please keep writing. (I listened to the song and wondered why anyone would "keep coming back for more." I hope you find her, my friend.)
Comment Written 04-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017
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is found better than fate
the search more rewarding than the wait
did not Abraham regret Sarah's haste
hello my Meadow...-smile-
ah thank you for all the great stuff you said. yes someone told me to read it recently ...the Psalm.
said it'd be spinach to me....headwag...always Michael
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And was it strengthening? I read it often myself.
I loved your poetic introduction to this reply. Some deep questions here to ponder. I hope you have the answers. ~ Meadow