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Comment from nomi338
As a matter of fact, I don't recall ever seeing a walrus in the flesh in all my 74 years of life. Funny, I have seen many different types of animals from all over the world, but cannot recall ever seeing a walrus except in photos or film clips. Your poem gave me quite a laugh, just to imagine such a thing. Good work.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2017
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As a matter of fact, I don't recall ever seeing a walrus in the flesh in all my 74 years of life. Funny, I have seen many different types of animals from all over the world, but cannot recall ever seeing a walrus except in photos or film clips. Your poem gave me quite a laugh, just to imagine such a thing. Good work.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2017
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Thanks, nomi. I just look in the mirror.
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
Hi Bill
Another fun poem that was a pleasure to read, after the first four lines I did wonder were it was going....then it made perfect sense...........very clever
Mitchell
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2017
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Hi Bill
Another fun poem that was a pleasure to read, after the first four lines I did wonder were it was going....then it made perfect sense...........very clever
Mitchell
Comment Written 29-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2017
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Thanks, Mitchell
Comment from Teri7
This is a very cute short poem you have penned about the walrus. You used very good and descriptive wording with nice art work. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2017
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This is a very cute short poem you have penned about the walrus. You used very good and descriptive wording with nice art work. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 28-Oct-2017
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Thanks, Teri
Comment from Ulla
Hi Bill, great little poem, and I liked it a lot. Well, I have to say something else and meaningful before I can post this. To be honest. It would have been nice to earn some phoney dollars. That's how this sit works after all if any of us are going to be able post. All best. Ulla:))
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2017
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Hi Bill, great little poem, and I liked it a lot. Well, I have to say something else and meaningful before I can post this. To be honest. It would have been nice to earn some phoney dollars. That's how this sit works after all if any of us are going to be able post. All best. Ulla:))
Comment Written 28-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2017
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Thanks, Ulla. I know, but I'm on the road this weekend and couldn't give it a chance to properly promote this one.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
This is a fun poem, well written.
I'll never look at Tiger Lilies the say way again, though. LOL
And no, I've not seen bow ties for awhile. Thank goodness.
Well done.
Sharon
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2017
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This is a fun poem, well written.
I'll never look at Tiger Lilies the say way again, though. LOL
And no, I've not seen bow ties for awhile. Thank goodness.
Well done.
Sharon
Comment Written 28-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2017
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Thanks, Sharon
Comment from RodG
You've got quite an imagination, Bill. In a thousand years I would never have thought to compare a tiger lily to a walrush's wadded up bubble gum bow tie, but it does LOOK like that in the picture. Rod
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2017
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You've got quite an imagination, Bill. In a thousand years I would never have thought to compare a tiger lily to a walrush's wadded up bubble gum bow tie, but it does LOOK like that in the picture. Rod
Comment Written 28-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2017
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Thanks, Rod. I'm on walruses and couldn't find a good picture of one with a bubble gum bow tie.