Two Glasses
One too many28 total reviews
Comment from Bichon
Good lyrics, you did a good job with them, but I think it's too short. Song lyrics usually have different verses, etc. Best of luck in the contest.
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Good lyrics, you did a good job with them, but I think it's too short. Song lyrics usually have different verses, etc. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2017
Comment from kathleenspalding
Ooo. This would make a great song! Excellent lyrics flow well and tell a sad story - but good for her for being strong and doing the sensible thing! I don't see anything that needs to be corrected, except the picture is sideways.
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Ooo. This would make a great song! Excellent lyrics flow well and tell a sad story - but good for her for being strong and doing the sensible thing! I don't see anything that needs to be corrected, except the picture is sideways.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2017
Comment from TAB_that's me
i like this song by the other woman. yes, so often the man doesn't intend to ever leave his wife so I like the 2 glasses of wine.
Good luck in the contest.
teresa
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i like this song by the other woman. yes, so often the man doesn't intend to ever leave his wife so I like the 2 glasses of wine.
Good luck in the contest.
teresa
Comment Written 29-Oct-2017
Comment from Boogienights
These are great lyrics for a song. I really like that they had kind of a country vibe. I could see Carrie Underwood singing this! I think it will do well in the contest, thanks for sharing.
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These are great lyrics for a song. I really like that they had kind of a country vibe. I could see Carrie Underwood singing this! I think it will do well in the contest, thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2017
Comment from giraffmang
Whilst there is a depth of feeling to this piece, it strikes me that it would be a particularly short or repetitive song. Most songs averaging three to four minutes...
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Whilst there is a depth of feeling to this piece, it strikes me that it would be a particularly short or repetitive song. Most songs averaging three to four minutes...
Comment Written 29-Oct-2017
Comment from GracieAnn
This Lyrics Make The Song Contest entry is strongly rhymed and elicits strong emotion of love lost, which begs the question, was it love versus lust for the participants. A very common philosophy. Solid abcb rhyming scheme. All the best in the contest! :0 GracieAnn
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This Lyrics Make The Song Contest entry is strongly rhymed and elicits strong emotion of love lost, which begs the question, was it love versus lust for the participants. A very common philosophy. Solid abcb rhyming scheme. All the best in the contest! :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 28-Oct-2017
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
HI anon - this is a lovely song. The words are really good, sung by the other woman. Good story, good words and well written. 'We had a love that couldn't last
For you were never mine. She's waiting for you back at home; Just two glasses for your wine.' Words like that go down well in a love song. Well done and Good luck in the contest. Regards Dorothy x
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HI anon - this is a lovely song. The words are really good, sung by the other woman. Good story, good words and well written. 'We had a love that couldn't last
For you were never mine. She's waiting for you back at home; Just two glasses for your wine.' Words like that go down well in a love song. Well done and Good luck in the contest. Regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 28-Oct-2017
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
Nicely done lyrics, my friend, it has a great rhythm to it. It's also, sad she left, lol, I know it's just a song, but a sad song:)) Have a great weekend. ~Kerry
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Nicely done lyrics, my friend, it has a great rhythm to it. It's also, sad she left, lol, I know it's just a song, but a sad song:)) Have a great weekend. ~Kerry
Comment Written 28-Oct-2017
Comment from Pantygynt
This is a very poignant lyric and, with the right tune and singer, could be a big hit. The words that end both second and final verses "just two glasses for your wine" remind me of Princess Diana's comment on the presence of the lady Camilla Parker-Bowles, as she then was, on the periphery of her marriage to Prince Carles. It was something about there being too many in that marriage. Diana would have understood this one well.
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This is a very poignant lyric and, with the right tune and singer, could be a big hit. The words that end both second and final verses "just two glasses for your wine" remind me of Princess Diana's comment on the presence of the lady Camilla Parker-Bowles, as she then was, on the periphery of her marriage to Prince Carles. It was something about there being too many in that marriage. Diana would have understood this one well.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2017
Comment from Heather Knight
This is beautifully written.
There are so many love stories like this one that can never come to fruition... Life is tough sometimes, isn't it?
Good luck in the contest.
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This is beautifully written.
There are so many love stories like this one that can never come to fruition... Life is tough sometimes, isn't it?
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2017
