Mommy And Me
'Poem For a Child' Contest Entry3 total reviews
Comment from rhonnie69
Hello Mommy And Me: Word has it that Dad gave Mom a baby. That being me. But I challenge to differ. Dad gave Mom to me. Best gift I ever got. Thanks to Dad.
Small wonder why sometimes I can be very lonely, 'cause I get to see Mommy only. Daddy gave me only one Mommy. I've imagined that that was because he was reserving space for him to fit in. And he's done that, OH, so well. Thanks to Mom. Mommy has given me all sorts of stuff, that gives me chills and thrills. Dad can't see, why Mommy and me,
should help him with the bills. So Mommy got me more, something from the brother store.
Your poem was so much entertaining fun that I couldn't "HELP" but butted in. I liked.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2017
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Hello Mommy And Me: Word has it that Dad gave Mom a baby. That being me. But I challenge to differ. Dad gave Mom to me. Best gift I ever got. Thanks to Dad.
Small wonder why sometimes I can be very lonely, 'cause I get to see Mommy only. Daddy gave me only one Mommy. I've imagined that that was because he was reserving space for him to fit in. And he's done that, OH, so well. Thanks to Mom. Mommy has given me all sorts of stuff, that gives me chills and thrills. Dad can't see, why Mommy and me,
should help him with the bills. So Mommy got me more, something from the brother store.
Your poem was so much entertaining fun that I couldn't "HELP" but butted in. I liked.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2017
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I'm glad you liked it, Rhon. I don't mind your butt.
Comment from Asem.inspirations
This is an awesome poem for a child, spoken perfectly in a child's voice. I could almost picture this child saying these things to me. I have, as most of us do, many years of experience in child care, in caring for my own children as well as many other children. These are the wishes and the thinking of a child. This Poet has captured it exactly and I love this.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
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This is an awesome poem for a child, spoken perfectly in a child's voice. I could almost picture this child saying these things to me. I have, as most of us do, many years of experience in child care, in caring for my own children as well as many other children. These are the wishes and the thinking of a child. This Poet has captured it exactly and I love this.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
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Thank you, Tier. Your insightful comments are very gratifying, because they express exactly what I had in mind while writing the poem.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A delightful poem for a child, filled with promise which ignite a child's imagination, a joy to read and I wish you luck with the contest, this is a winner for me, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
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A delightful poem for a child, filled with promise which ignite a child's imagination, a joy to read and I wish you luck with the contest, this is a winner for me, love Dolly x
Comment Written 26-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
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Dolly, thank you for your encouraging review, and the love, too.
