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My Superman

Repetition Poem contest entry

11 total reviews 
Comment from pbomar1115
Excellent
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I get the impression the boy grew up and joined the military and was one of the fallen. Like most kids growing up in a stable home environment, their play time-- filled with good, imaginary heroes-- influence the way and how they grow. Nice poem.

Phillip

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 Comment Written 24-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 24-Oct-2017
    Thank you for the great review, Phillip. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked the piece.
reply by pbomar1115 on 24-Oct-2017
    You're welcome.

    Phillip