My Superman
Repetition Poem contest entry11 total reviews
Comment from Irish Rain
Aww, so sadly pretty. He wanted with all of his heart to be Superman, and it finally came about. This is a beautiful entry in this contest. Blessings...
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
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Aww, so sadly pretty. He wanted with all of his heart to be Superman, and it finally came about. This is a beautiful entry in this contest. Blessings...
Comment Written 26-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Irish. I really appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written repetition poem. Every boy dreams to be a Superman who will safe the world someday when they are grown. We can just be glad that they stay alive.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
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A very well-written repetition poem. Every boy dreams to be a Superman who will safe the world someday when they are grown. We can just be glad that they stay alive.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
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Thank you for the great review, Sandra. I really appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from emptypage
This is lovely and absolutely heartbreaking. True? If so, if it's true for you or someone you love, I can't begin to say how sorry I am.
Even if you just created the scenario, it is beautifully written. It moved me.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
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This is lovely and absolutely heartbreaking. True? If so, if it's true for you or someone you love, I can't begin to say how sorry I am.
Even if you just created the scenario, it is beautifully written. It moved me.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
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Thank you for the fantastic review, ep. I have in the author notes that this wasn't an actual bio but it was real close. While in Iraq, my wife's son was shot in the chest by a sniper. Praise God that the gear he was wearing saved his life. I really appreciate the gracious stars, ep. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have a great day.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Children like to have super heros to look up to and aspire to and superman is not a bad role model, your poem is well rhymed and has great flow, best wishes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
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Children like to have super heros to look up to and aspire to and superman is not a bad role model, your poem is well rhymed and has great flow, best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 26-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
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Thank you for the great review, Dolly. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from Mimi Linny
Very nicely done repetition poem! The rhythm and rhyme work well and the story told flows smoothly. For your sake, was very happy to know that your poem wasn't a real bio. Great job - and good luck in the writing prompt contest!
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
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Very nicely done repetition poem! The rhythm and rhyme work well and the story told flows smoothly. For your sake, was very happy to know that your poem wasn't a real bio. Great job - and good luck in the writing prompt contest!
Comment Written 24-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
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Thank you for the great review, Mimi. Yes, we got real lucky. My wife's son got shot in the chest by a sniper in Iraq. Thank God his gear saved his life. I really appreciate the gracious stars and good luck wishes M. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from marybell1
I enjoyed reading your poem - though sad, "My Superman". You followed all the rules for this genre and you chose an appropriate picture.
All the best.
Marybell1.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
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I enjoyed reading your poem - though sad, "My Superman". You followed all the rules for this genre and you chose an appropriate picture.
All the best.
Marybell1.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
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Thank you for the excellent review and gracious stars, Marybell1. I'm glad you liked the piece.
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You are most welcome.
Marybell1.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written repetition poem you have penned for the prompt about a real life superman. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with the art work. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
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This is a very well written repetition poem you have penned for the prompt about a real life superman. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with the art work. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 24-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
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Thank you for the great review and gracious stars, Teri7. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from Mustang Patty
Thank you for sharing your entry for the Repetition poem poetry contest. Your words were poignant, and they brought a gasp and tear to my eye in the last stanza. Prayers for all the mother and fathers of the little boys and girls who didn't come home,
~patty~
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
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Thank you for sharing your entry for the Repetition poem poetry contest. Your words were poignant, and they brought a gasp and tear to my eye in the last stanza. Prayers for all the mother and fathers of the little boys and girls who didn't come home,
~patty~
Comment Written 24-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
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Thank you for the excellent review, Patty. Yes, we got lucky. My wife's son was shot in the chest by a sniper while he was in Iraq. Praise God his gear saved his life. I really appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from GracieAnn
This Repetition Poem submission follows the requirements of the contest in an effective way using thoughts that are easily understood and ones we can all relate to as parents. Nicely crafted. :0 GracieAnn
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
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This Repetition Poem submission follows the requirements of the contest in an effective way using thoughts that are easily understood and ones we can all relate to as parents. Nicely crafted. :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 24-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
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Thank you for the great review, GracieAnn. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from Jason Leon Neuffer
A beautiful narrative, and most definitely a piece of work that came from the heart. I like how you portrayed the innocence of the boy from the beginning. Unlike most people this particular boy never lost sight of his childhood dream, and pursued what was right. This is of course my taking from this poem, and it's an excellent piece of work.
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reply by the author on 24-Oct-2017
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A beautiful narrative, and most definitely a piece of work that came from the heart. I like how you portrayed the innocence of the boy from the beginning. Unlike most people this particular boy never lost sight of his childhood dream, and pursued what was right. This is of course my taking from this poem, and it's an excellent piece of work.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2017
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Jason. Yeah, we got lucky. My wife's son was shot in the chest by a sniper in Iraq but luckily his gear saved his life. I really appreciate the generous stars and kind words, J. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have a great night.
