Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

Another brilliant contest entry, how come you're not winning? The others couldn't have been so much better than yours. I thought you managed this story amazingly well, all with the letter R. It was quite a mouthful to read out aloud without tripping over your tongue! Lol Sandra xx

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022

Thank you, Sandra, for the kind review.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I see there were some I hadn't already reviewed. And this alliteration flash fiction was well done and even provided a plot and a good successful end to the rat infestation.

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022

Some of these are ten years old.

reply by lyenochka on 27-Apr-2022

Wow, that's before we even met!

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

Telling a complete and meaningful story using fifty "R' words is not an easy thing to do.
Well done and good luck with the 'Letter of the Law' competition.

Sharon

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017

Thanks, Sharon.

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Dear Anonymous Poet;
Thank you for sharing your entry in the 'The Law of the Letter' contest. Your use of the letter 'R' in your story-telling within a poem comes through - but I had to read very carefully to make sure it wasn't alliterated nonsense.

Good luck in the contest,

~patty~

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2017

It was 'rifficult' .

reply by Mustang Patty on 23-Oct-2017

LOL

Comment from Liberty Justice

Excellent

WOW! Five stars excellent. Nicely done and photo goes with all these "R's." You perfectly coined a multitude of r's describing this rotunda which must have been hard to do, but this is an interesting pattern. SO NICE. lol liberty justice

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2017

Thanks, LJ.