FAMILY TIES.
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Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
What a lovely tribute to your teachers. Clever job with the acrostic--doesn't sound forced as so many of this form do--you rose to the challenge! I love the line: homework that our dog didn't eat. Cheers. LIZ
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What a lovely tribute to your teachers. Clever job with the acrostic--doesn't sound forced as so many of this form do--you rose to the challenge! I love the line: homework that our dog didn't eat. Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 29-Mar-2020
Comment from Ben Colder
The value of teachers are underestimated . They spend more time with your children than you do. Important that you know that teacher well so as to work with them toward educating your child.
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The value of teachers are underestimated . They spend more time with your children than you do. Important that you know that teacher well so as to work with them toward educating your child.
Comment Written 11-May-2018
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Good tribute to teachers, a profession that can be so easily overlooked. Good rhyme, rhythm, and flow. Touch of humor thrown in for good measure. Well done.
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Good tribute to teachers, a profession that can be so easily overlooked. Good rhyme, rhythm, and flow. Touch of humor thrown in for good measure. Well done.
Comment Written 11-May-2018
Comment from Raoul D'Harmental
Hh Rhonnie
This is a wonderful tribute to the selflessness of teachers which goes against the usual trope of kids disliking school. Excellently written acrostic. Thanks for sharing this. R
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Hh Rhonnie
This is a wonderful tribute to the selflessness of teachers which goes against the usual trope of kids disliking school. Excellently written acrostic. Thanks for sharing this. R
Comment Written 11-May-2018
Comment from Raul1
Excellent poem. I like very much how you complimented well your teachers. They deservedly so need to be well complimented by educating us all students.
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Excellent poem. I like very much how you complimented well your teachers. They deservedly so need to be well complimented by educating us all students.
Comment Written 10-May-2018
Comment from krys123
Bravo, RHONNIE69;
-I opened up this page And witnessed two children in the silhouetted format and each reading a book. I slowly surmise before my very eyes, that The system do something with education, learning, golden rules, etc. etc.
-I love you all and I witness also a rhyming couplet quatrain written in iambic tetrameter followed by iambic Trimeter.
-On top of this there is acrostic poem That has been manipulated to a formatted structure of rhyming couplets. Just happens to be there were enough letters to finish it as a running couplet. Great job adding the "S".
-On the letter "R" I would have used resilience. Reason being,, and that I've only Been a teacher for one semester , But as a student teacher, And I thought being resilience after being or trying to be brought down by students boards are big part of my learning.
-Thanks for sharing this my friend, as I really enjoyed the mixed formatted combination of poems.
-Take care and have a good one especially with all those that love you dearly.
Alex
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Bravo, RHONNIE69;
-I opened up this page And witnessed two children in the silhouetted format and each reading a book. I slowly surmise before my very eyes, that The system do something with education, learning, golden rules, etc. etc.
-I love you all and I witness also a rhyming couplet quatrain written in iambic tetrameter followed by iambic Trimeter.
-On top of this there is acrostic poem That has been manipulated to a formatted structure of rhyming couplets. Just happens to be there were enough letters to finish it as a running couplet. Great job adding the "S".
-On the letter "R" I would have used resilience. Reason being,, and that I've only Been a teacher for one semester , But as a student teacher, And I thought being resilience after being or trying to be brought down by students boards are big part of my learning.
-Thanks for sharing this my friend, as I really enjoyed the mixed formatted combination of poems.
-Take care and have a good one especially with all those that love you dearly.
Alex
Comment Written 10-May-2018
Comment from victor 66
This is a very nice poem, Rhonnie. It flows smoothly with rhythm and rhyme, and it was just fun to read. I taught for thirty-five years and I appreciate this very much.
Thank you. And, congratulations on your win.
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This is a very nice poem, Rhonnie. It flows smoothly with rhythm and rhyme, and it was just fun to read. I taught for thirty-five years and I appreciate this very much.
Thank you. And, congratulations on your win.
Comment Written 10-May-2018
Comment from bob cullen
This is a deserving winner. It is a poem that has everything. Rhyme, flow and most of all a great message.
Teachers really are the HEROES of the education system. Most give their ALL for their students, unless of course we're speaking about the cane-happy Brothers who taught me!
A great poem.
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This is a deserving winner. It is a poem that has everything. Rhyme, flow and most of all a great message.
Teachers really are the HEROES of the education system. Most give their ALL for their students, unless of course we're speaking about the cane-happy Brothers who taught me!
A great poem.
Comment Written 10-May-2018
Comment from nomi338
No tribute to any of my excellent teachers would be complete without acknowledging my two older sisters who taught me very well before I started school. They created such a thirst for learning within me that when I started school, i was far ahead of almost all of the other students in my class. A student who enjoys learning is for a teacher like found treasure. Thank you to all my teachers, including my wonderful sisters.
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No tribute to any of my excellent teachers would be complete without acknowledging my two older sisters who taught me very well before I started school. They created such a thirst for learning within me that when I started school, i was far ahead of almost all of the other students in my class. A student who enjoys learning is for a teacher like found treasure. Thank you to all my teachers, including my wonderful sisters.
Comment Written 10-May-2018
Comment from Gert sherwood
Congratulations rhonnie69
for being adware first prize
any you using your nice thoughts spelling out the word Teacher,
Gert
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Congratulations rhonnie69
for being adware first prize
any you using your nice thoughts spelling out the word Teacher,
Gert
Comment Written 10-May-2018