Comment from Irish Rain

Excellent

I just loved this, a welcome touch of lightness to my reviews tonight. The names are wonderful, especially 'Uraweeny!' Blessings....

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017

Thanks, IR, for the encouraging review. Bill

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is another very cute duck poem you have penned with them having a conversation. You used very cute dialog and very good imagery with the picture of the cute little kitten and the cute ducks. That is so strange. I posted a poem about a white dog and two ducks? Ducks must be in demand these days! Great job. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017

Thanks, Teri

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hi Bill, I've often enough asked you, but where the heck do you get it from? The names alone are so innovative and sets the whole scene. I loved the picture. So cute! All the best. Ulla:))

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2017

Thanks, Ulla, for the nice comments. Bill

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks about two ducks and their father duck and a cat that are so innocently keep talking to quarrelling and fighting and the father duck reminds them it is night for sleep; I liked.

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2017

Thanks, ALD

reply by the author on 17-Oct-2017

Thanks, ALD

Comment from Allyzeé

Excellent

Aww, really nice poem. I love the humor in it. It has a really good flow and rhythm to it. I also like the title, "Duck World"
Best wishes for you
Allyzeé

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2017

Thanks, Allyzee

reply by the author on 17-Oct-2017

Thanks, Allyzee

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Say goodnight William, "Goodnight William." Look Billy, may I call you Billy? One thing becomes clear, Billy is quite silly, and that is not a bad thing. I must be going crazy in my old age as I am beginning to really enjoy your forays into the bizarre.

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2017

Thanks, nomi. Ducks just seem silly.

reply by the author on 17-Oct-2017

Thanks, nomi. Ducks just seem silly.

Comment from Oatmeal

Excellent

BILL SCHOTT,

The poem was very cute. The arrangement was nice. The names you chose were very unusual. Very enchanted atmosphere, non-judgmental, enjoyable and thrilling. The descriptive words created wonderful impressions.

There was no SPAG. No typos. No homophones. No problems at all.

I look forward to seeing you again.

Love you,

Oatmeal

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2017

Thanks, Oatmeal

reply by the author on 17-Oct-2017

Thanks, Oatmeal

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Ha, love it Bill. You'll always catch me smiling with a cute little kitty and a couple of ducks and having a quarrel of sorts. Reads like a charm and they definitely are in possession of good conflict resolution skills.

love it.

Gloria

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2017

Thanks, Gloria

reply by the author on 17-Oct-2017

Thanks, Gloria

Comment from Mitchell Brontë

Excellent

Your wonderful imagination is at it again Bill, another excellent offering that had me smiling.
Love the characters and the superb dialogue.
Great stuff
Mitchell

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017

Thanks, Mitchell

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Lol! But the picture is adorable. Did it inspire the poem? Actually, on second viewing, the kitten seems to be saying, "Ow! you're on my paw. Get off!" Or perhaps it's two ducklings arresting Uraweeny. Anyway, I wondered if you wanted "tete a tete?"

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017

Yes, thank you. There are a few accepted spellings, I guess, but the one you suggested looks best.