Randy Ronald
Ronald Says It Like It Is5 total reviews
Comment from Joy Graham
Hi there,
I think this is my first time reading your work. I enjoyed this Donald Trump story. He is entertaining if nothing else.
A few things I noticed while reading.
- "You're so irrestible" - irresistable
- "sarcastic when I said you were (irrestible)" - irresistable
- "...really didn't say she wants (to) go out with you..."
I enjoyed your characters in this story. They come across as real with terrific personalities. That's awesome. Congratulations in placing in this contest. I look forward to reading more of your work.
Sincerely Joy xx
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2018
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Hi there,
I think this is my first time reading your work. I enjoyed this Donald Trump story. He is entertaining if nothing else.
A few things I noticed while reading.
- "You're so irrestible" - irresistable
- "sarcastic when I said you were (irrestible)" - irresistable
- "...really didn't say she wants (to) go out with you..."
I enjoyed your characters in this story. They come across as real with terrific personalities. That's awesome. Congratulations in placing in this contest. I look forward to reading more of your work.
Sincerely Joy xx
Comment Written 14-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2018
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Hi, Joy! Thanks so much for the reading and review.
OMG, I can't believe I let that spelling error slide by. Thank you for picking up on it:)
The news of the honorable mention comes first from you as well:) Thank you.
Glad you stopped by! Please do again.
All the Best,
Stacia
Comment from Beverly Botelho
A winner of a card by any other name! This is great. I'm willing to bet that most, if not all, women have encountered situations like this in their lifetime. It takes courage for someone to go public. Thank you.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
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A winner of a card by any other name! This is great. I'm willing to bet that most, if not all, women have encountered situations like this in their lifetime. It takes courage for someone to go public. Thank you.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
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Thanks so much for the reading and review! Yes, a meme in circulating facebook asking women to simply type "yes" if they've experienced harassment. Too many have:(
Thanks again for stopping by.
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I certainly hope you'll publish this somewhere. This type of behavior will not stop unless the effects are expressed vividly and often.
Comment from Rasmine
Hello,
My computer is working right now -- but not for long.
There was a part where I think you could separate the paragraphs, where he is talking to his friend near the water cooler, then talking to Alice.
Good dedication! :P
Win that contest for all us women!
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
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Hello,
My computer is working right now -- but not for long.
There was a part where I think you could separate the paragraphs, where he is talking to his friend near the water cooler, then talking to Alice.
Good dedication! :P
Win that contest for all us women!
Comment Written 16-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
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Thanks, Nome, for the reading and review! I know the place you're referring to; I think you're right. I'll revise that.
The women especially who are still supporting this "president" make me sad and angry. The way Trump talks about and treats his daughter Ivanka, alone--I'd divorce him so fast, whether or not I were her mom.
Thanks again for stopping by:)
Stacia
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Yeah, I think they have selected hearing because would they allow a man to say 'grab by the pussy', I mean OMG! And I am kind of afraid of Trump's antagonizing of crazy Kim. Phew. Can't wait for 2020 -- hopefully, he won't get back in.
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I agree. Democrats do have the possibility of retaking the House and even Senate in 2018, at which point they'd probably start impeachment proceedings.
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I hope so!!!! He's such a buffoon. :P
Comment from Walu Feral
G'day Stacia.
"Yeah, dude. Air with fresh sewage." (Hahahaha! Well played.)
I'm on your side... there are some gigantic jerks around at the moment. So many in positions of power are just like you write here... scary isn't it?
A very good contest entry and I wish you the best of luck in it.
Great job.
Cheers Fez
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
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G'day Stacia.
"Yeah, dude. Air with fresh sewage." (Hahahaha! Well played.)
I'm on your side... there are some gigantic jerks around at the moment. So many in positions of power are just like you write here... scary isn't it?
A very good contest entry and I wish you the best of luck in it.
Great job.
Cheers Fez
Comment Written 16-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
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Thanks for the reading and review, Fez!
Yes, it's a sad climate we're living in now. There probably always have been those in positions of power who have abused that power to harass and exploit--it has to do with a feeling of entitlement, I think, and immunity to repercussions. I have hopes we are going to close this chapter of our history soon.
Thanks again for stopping by!
Stacia
Comment from Thomas Bowling
This is very good. In light of current events, you could have named it Harvey Weinstein. Good luck in the contest. With this entry, I predict you will do well.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
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This is very good. In light of current events, you could have named it Harvey Weinstein. Good luck in the contest. With this entry, I predict you will do well.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
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Thanks for the reading and review, Thomas! Much appreciated.
I did actually have Donald Trump in mind as I wrote the piece, as indicated by the name and the quotes taken directly from Trump--but two sides of a coin, I guess.
Thanks again for stopping by:)
Stacia
