Bump Stocks Forever
NRA says it protects you7 total reviews
Comment from kathleenspalding
Well done poem flows well, is easy to understand, and has an excellent, sarcastic message. I would recommend this poem to all nra members. I don't see anything that needs to be corrected. Good job!
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2017
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Well done poem flows well, is easy to understand, and has an excellent, sarcastic message. I would recommend this poem to all nra members. I don't see anything that needs to be corrected. Good job!
Comment Written 16-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2017
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Thank you for your read and your kind review.
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You're welcome
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I think your poem is very well written. The flow is excellent. The rhyme scheme is natural. Each word choice seems to fit naturally - nothing is forced. And your political points hit home. Well done.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
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I think your poem is very well written. The flow is excellent. The rhyme scheme is natural. Each word choice seems to fit naturally - nothing is forced. And your political points hit home. Well done.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
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Thank you for your read and your review.
Comment from Bill Schott
This little satirical chant falls right in line with, not only the challenge requirements but, the current issue in our line of sight since the horrific shooting in Las Vegas.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
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This little satirical chant falls right in line with, not only the challenge requirements but, the current issue in our line of sight since the horrific shooting in Las Vegas.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
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Thank you for the read and the review.
Comment from jenintorre
This is a brilliant contender for the competition. It fits the criteria perfectly. It is a very serious subject but I love your humorous, tongue in cheek take on it. Good luck.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
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This is a brilliant contender for the competition. It fits the criteria perfectly. It is a very serious subject but I love your humorous, tongue in cheek take on it. Good luck.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
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Thank you for the rating, read and comment.
Comment from Mustang Patty
Dear Anonymous Author;
You did a good job with your words and presentation. The NRA once held a very important place, but I'm not really sure there is a need for an organization supporting those who demand to have automatic weapons.
Gone are the days when a farmer needed to protect his family and shoot to provide meat for their table. Maybe its time for the NRA to be gone, too.
~patty~
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
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Dear Anonymous Author;
You did a good job with your words and presentation. The NRA once held a very important place, but I'm not really sure there is a need for an organization supporting those who demand to have automatic weapons.
Gone are the days when a farmer needed to protect his family and shoot to provide meat for their table. Maybe its time for the NRA to be gone, too.
~patty~
Comment Written 15-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
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Right on . Could not agree with you more. Thanks for the read and the comments.
Comment from RodG
You do an excellent job of satirizing the NRA and parodying what their latest advertisements might say. The SERIOUS note underneath is that we remember all too well how those "bump stocks" were used in Las Vegas. A solid entry in this contest!
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
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You do an excellent job of satirizing the NRA and parodying what their latest advertisements might say. The SERIOUS note underneath is that we remember all too well how those "bump stocks" were used in Las Vegas. A solid entry in this contest!
Comment Written 15-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
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Thanks for your read and comments.
Comment from Lucian Carter
I don't live in the U.S. I'm glad much of the time, especially when it comes to the insane gun fetish the gun lobby so many have. You express an opinion, I share. More importantly, you do it with poetic style. Good luck.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
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I don't live in the U.S. I'm glad much of the time, especially when it comes to the insane gun fetish the gun lobby so many have. You express an opinion, I share. More importantly, you do it with poetic style. Good luck.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
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Thank you for your read and your comments. Too bad our politicians are so driven by money that they lose sight of the importance of keeping our country safe.
