Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Hello my friend this is well written a good fun script with great use of language throughout and I enjoyed like many other readers will to well done regards Jill

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017

Thanks, Jill

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hi Bill, I love it. Those two mad cops are a hoot. I love the accent,although I will admit that in places is difficult to follow. But I get there in the end. Great writing. All the best. Ulla:))

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017

Thanks, Ulla

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very cute script you have penned. It almost sounds like the three stooges together. You used very cute dialogue even though it was hard for me to understand. I did get it, just had to read it slower! Cute job my friend! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017

Thanks, Teri

Comment from Poetic Friend

Excellent

Well, Bill, this series remind me of the Ned series. You do such an excellent job with the English dialect. You must have encounter people with this dialect.

I am enjoying these two characters. They are a hoot. I am looking forward to reading more about these characters.

Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017

Thanks, PF

Comment from Jay Squires

Exceptional

What a fascinating collection of characters you have tumbling through your mind. I have a hunch you don't harbor a censor looking over your shoulder--and that's good.

madcap detectives make for fascinating reading.

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017

Thanks, Jay. I appreciate the encouraging comments. Bill

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I can just hear the gruff voice of Duck. Cute take on the phrase and the comical take of that kind of private eye shtik. Fun dialog with the accent rendered to include misunderstanding for humorous effect.

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2017

Thanks, lyenochka.

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

These two losers are so dumb, that if they were to venture out during hunting season, they would be quickly be put out of business. Duck and Cova would be quite suitable in their sad case.

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2017

They are the Pons and Ned of the Duck World, only dumber.

reply by nomi338 on 14-Oct-2017

Wow. Is that even possible?