Comment from LaRosa

Exceptional

Harry, was this a contest?
If so, I hope you did well.
I love the development of the chasms of the mind imagery, and the brilliance of a love that fills it all!

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2017

Yes, this was a contest. Don't know the results at this time. Thanks for the read and the rating. Much appreciated.

Comment from Brigitte Elko

Excellent

You have accomplished posting another winner. The analogy in this poem is excellent and very cleverly written. The parameters of the contest are followed to perfection. I loved reading this and the artwork you chose is exemplary for the content. Good luck in the contest.
Fan Friend,
Brigitte

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017

Thank you very much for your read and your kind words.

reply by Brigitte Elko on 09-Oct-2017

You are welcome.
Brgitte

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Hi, Harry;
thank you for sharing your Tetractys contest entry with us. I found the words within the lines to be reflected in the artwork you chose to compliment the piece. Good luck in the contest,

~patty~

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017

Thank you very much for the read and the review.

Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)

Excellent

For such a short poem this says a lot. It is very short but sweet and appealing. I enjoyed it Harry, I am not entirely sure it fits the form but it does you will do well with it I am sure kind regards and good luck Meia xx

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017

Thank you very much for the read and the review. I"m pretty sure it does fit the form 1-2-3-4-10.