LOVE OF NATURE
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Purple"Eclectic
16 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Wow...started out so beautiful with your purples coating both nature and actions... but that last stanza is like a punch to the gut for a smiling reader. Your offering certainly delivers an emotional roller coaster, Trisha!! ;) :) :) Yvette
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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Wow...started out so beautiful with your purples coating both nature and actions... but that last stanza is like a punch to the gut for a smiling reader. Your offering certainly delivers an emotional roller coaster, Trisha!! ;) :) :) Yvette
Comment Written 19-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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I?m glad YOU enjoyed the poem! I am grateful for your reviews.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Debbie Pope
With your love of colors, I bet you really enjoyed writing this piece. Dark purple is one of my favorites. The sight of it has an emotional impact on me. It makes me happy. Your portrayal of the color is rather negative though. I never thought of it that way. And you mention the movie "The Color Purple." I've not seen it, but I certainly know the plot. I never thought about where the title comes from. I've got to look that up.
You gave me pause with this one, Trisha. Seriously. Colors mean a lot to me. I enjoyed thinking about purple from your viewpoint.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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With your love of colors, I bet you really enjoyed writing this piece. Dark purple is one of my favorites. The sight of it has an emotional impact on me. It makes me happy. Your portrayal of the color is rather negative though. I never thought of it that way. And you mention the movie "The Color Purple." I've not seen it, but I certainly know the plot. I never thought about where the title comes from. I've got to look that up.
You gave me pause with this one, Trisha. Seriously. Colors mean a lot to me. I enjoyed thinking about purple from your viewpoint.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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My mum?s favorite colour was purple , so I grew up with it. I like your link to emotion though. I?m glad you enjoyed the poem! I am grateful for your reviews.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a clever verse for the "Ekphrastic Free Verse" event.
You describe the color purple in so many ways you almost bring the color to life.
Well done and challenge well met.
Sharon
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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I think this is a clever verse for the "Ekphrastic Free Verse" event.
You describe the color purple in so many ways you almost bring the color to life.
Well done and challenge well met.
Sharon
Comment Written 19-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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I?m glad you enjoyed the poem! I am grateful for your reviews.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Your free verse talks about the beauty of all the purples that we are surrounded by, but finishes with a warning of purple pollution, ominous clouds. Well written free verse Trisha, nicely presented.
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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Your free verse talks about the beauty of all the purples that we are surrounded by, but finishes with a warning of purple pollution, ominous clouds. Well written free verse Trisha, nicely presented.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 16-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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I?m glad you enjoyed the poem! I am grateful for your reviews.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written Ekphrastic free verse poem you have penned about the color Purple. You used great descriptive words and very lovely imagery. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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This is a very well written Ekphrastic free verse poem you have penned about the color Purple. You used great descriptive words and very lovely imagery. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 15-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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I?m glad you enjoyed the poem! I am grateful for your reviews.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from damommy
If you want to avoid the 'end rhyme dilemma,' just rearrange some of your lines so that these would be internal rhyme. Make your lines a little less 'squared.'
You offered many good explanations for purple. Thank you for participating.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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If you want to avoid the 'end rhyme dilemma,' just rearrange some of your lines so that these would be internal rhyme. Make your lines a little less 'squared.'
You offered many good explanations for purple. Thank you for participating.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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Food for thought! glad you enjoyed the poem! I am grateful for your reviews.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the Club Challenge nicely as you deliver a well penned Free Verse on the color purple. There's a few spots of solid end rhyme pattern sneaking through this so you might want to look it over one more time if you plan on this book being pure Free Verse. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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This meets the Club Challenge nicely as you deliver a well penned Free Verse on the color purple. There's a few spots of solid end rhyme pattern sneaking through this so you might want to look it over one more time if you plan on this book being pure Free Verse. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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It will be eclectic,.
I?m grateful for your support
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Bill Pinder
This poem bridges a wide range of thoughts about the color purple. You begin talking about the beauty of the color and move into dealing with drama and end with dying from pollution. I think I'll focus on the more positive aspect. Thanks for sharing! Bill
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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This poem bridges a wide range of thoughts about the color purple. You begin talking about the beauty of the color and move into dealing with drama and end with dying from pollution. I think I'll focus on the more positive aspect. Thanks for sharing! Bill
Comment Written 15-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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Yes, good idea! I?m glad you enjoyed the poem! I am grateful for your reviews.
Hugs, Trisha
Congratulations
Comment from Susan X Smith
While many of your phrases are effective, I think that the flow could be improved with better rhythm. For example, the last line could be reworked into something more poetic. That being said, I did enjoy reading this poem and appreciate the sentiment that "purple is nature's gift." The background color and picture highlight the poem very well. I gave this poem five stars because I did not feel that it was seriously lacking.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2019
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While many of your phrases are effective, I think that the flow could be improved with better rhythm. For example, the last line could be reworked into something more poetic. That being said, I did enjoy reading this poem and appreciate the sentiment that "purple is nature's gift." The background color and picture highlight the poem very well. I gave this poem five stars because I did not feel that it was seriously lacking.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2019
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Thanks for your review,.i was under the impression that free verse did not have rules! It?s personal style, But thanks for your opinion.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written ekphrastic free verse poem about the color purple that have so many aspects and meanings we can talk for long times about purple and its purposes.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2019
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A very well-written ekphrastic free verse poem about the color purple that have so many aspects and meanings we can talk for long times about purple and its purposes.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2019
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Yes, the subject does lend itself to many things. Thanks for reviewing, Sandra
Hugs, Trisha
