Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

Pay the rent on life.............I love that line.
You still give the emotion and total feeling of loss as it never goes away, but you also give hope

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017

My dear Barbara the loss of a spouse is tremendous combined with the loss of a child definitely not stupendous cross my heart and hope to die write these words that will make you cry dr. Ricky 1024

Comment from DonandVicki

Excellent

A poetic/prose verse that is a tribute to your wife's memory.Your poem leaves a lot up to the reader's imagination, as all good poetry should do. I enjoyed the flow of your well-crafted words. Well written, well done. Don

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017

This was a part of one of my grieving books the sorrow Knights of the heart teaser for sorrow or sorrow DDR the heart that no longer beats but it still exists the heart that tries as hard as they can but there's always resist unfortunately this heart broke not once but twice sending my wife at the age of 49 to an early grave thanks for your kind thoughts and reviewed Donald and Ricky this is coming through a cell phone sorry about that doctor Ricky 1024 God bless you

Comment from Abby Wilson-hand

Excellent

I SIPLY LOVE THE WAY IT'S PUT
MY DEAR FRIEND RICKY HOPE ALL
IS WELL AND MAY GOD BLESS YOU

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017

Thanks forever Abb..

RICKY ..