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Dog waits for his master2 total reviews
Comment from kiwisteveh
Nice picture you have found as the inspiration for this little Septolet poem, and you have stuck to the conditions well. The two halves are well-balanced and I liked that you sneaked a rhyme into the first stanza as well.
Good luck.
Steve
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2017
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Nice picture you have found as the inspiration for this little Septolet poem, and you have stuck to the conditions well. The two halves are well-balanced and I liked that you sneaked a rhyme into the first stanza as well.
Good luck.
Steve
Comment Written 07-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2017
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Thanks for the read and your encouraging words.
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi
= Good Septolet entry.
= Of course, it helps when the dog likes balls.
= Our miniature dachshund looks at us like we're crazy if we put a ball in front of her.
= Fetching is also something Miss Pepperoni will NOT do. She's a little diva.
= Hope you do well in the contest. Good Luck.
Cheers, J (*<*)
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2017
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Hi
= Good Septolet entry.
= Of course, it helps when the dog likes balls.
= Our miniature dachshund looks at us like we're crazy if we put a ball in front of her.
= Fetching is also something Miss Pepperoni will NOT do. She's a little diva.
= Hope you do well in the contest. Good Luck.
Cheers, J (*<*)
Comment Written 06-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2017
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Sounds like you have some doggie challenges. Thanks for your read and your comments.
