In The Midnight Hours
Love Story15 total reviews
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very well written ans beautifully present poem for the love poem contest. Your last stanza sums up the whole of the poem nicely. Patricia
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017
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This is a very well written ans beautifully present poem for the love poem contest. Your last stanza sums up the whole of the poem nicely. Patricia
Comment Written 11-Oct-2017
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Comment from Lucian Carter
This is an interesting love poem, in that it's somewhat open ended as to what actually happened in it.
Regardless, this ode to lost love and it's sweeter memories is touching and reads very well. I like how you play with rhyme in what is essentially a free verse poem. It's an interesting mixture of styles. I like it.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2017
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This is an interesting love poem, in that it's somewhat open ended as to what actually happened in it.
Regardless, this ode to lost love and it's sweeter memories is touching and reads very well. I like how you play with rhyme in what is essentially a free verse poem. It's an interesting mixture of styles. I like it.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2017
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Comment from smileycloud
a true love story
very beautifully expressed
the form is good
I see the rhyme scheme only happens in some stanzas and not all and that appears to work very well
good luck in the contest
have a smiley ady
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2017
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a true love story
very beautifully expressed
the form is good
I see the rhyme scheme only happens in some stanzas and not all and that appears to work very well
good luck in the contest
have a smiley ady
Comment Written 10-Oct-2017
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Comment from BeasPeas
This is a beautiful love poem. Many good lines within it, but these are my favorite:
"The years have fled and passed ahead
So many words I should have said
I remember rainbows in your eyes
promising never to say goodbye"
We regret what we "should have said" but didn't. I guess that is a nudge to remind ourselves that we should say them more often.
Marilyn
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2017
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This is a beautiful love poem. Many good lines within it, but these are my favorite:
"The years have fled and passed ahead
So many words I should have said
I remember rainbows in your eyes
promising never to say goodbye"
We regret what we "should have said" but didn't. I guess that is a nudge to remind ourselves that we should say them more often.
Marilyn
Comment Written 09-Oct-2017
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Comment from Ogden
Very well-written and evocative poetry, all the more poignant if the reader has thev impression that the loved one is deceased.
Good luck in the contest voting.
Don (aka Ogden)
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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Very well-written and evocative poetry, all the more poignant if the reader has thev impression that the loved one is deceased.
Good luck in the contest voting.
Don (aka Ogden)
Comment Written 09-Oct-2017
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You are very welcome, Digits.
Comment from Heather Knight
This melancholy poem is very beautiful. I feel for the narrator who misses his lover.
I love the line: I remember rainbows in your eyes.
This is great. Keep writing.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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This melancholy poem is very beautiful. I feel for the narrator who misses his lover.
I love the line: I remember rainbows in your eyes.
This is great. Keep writing.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2017
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A romantic live poem, fanciful and filled with a kind of regret. I could identify with your words as I wished I had said so much more when my husband was alive. He's been gone for 9 years now, but never forgotten. I wish you luck with the contest, your poems went straight to my heart, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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A romantic live poem, fanciful and filled with a kind of regret. I could identify with your words as I wished I had said so much more when my husband was alive. He's been gone for 9 years now, but never forgotten. I wish you luck with the contest, your poems went straight to my heart, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Oct-2017
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Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Fastdigits
= Beautifully written poem for the prompt.
= The sentiment in this is so heartfelt.
= Excellent choice of artwork as well.
= Good luck in the contest.
Cheer, J (*<*)
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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Hi, Fastdigits
= Beautifully written poem for the prompt.
= The sentiment in this is so heartfelt.
= Excellent choice of artwork as well.
= Good luck in the contest.
Cheer, J (*<*)
Comment Written 08-Oct-2017
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Comment from LateBloomer
Hello fastdigits, your poem is so very romantic and beautifully penned in soft and soulful images. I
especially liked:
In my mind I see your face
from some forgotten dream
Like a picture on a canvas
Shaping images in my mind
(Very lovely. Dreams - a place where all things are possible and all things come to life.)
I also liked:
Now dawn lights up the sky
One last kiss before goodbye
Remaining forever lost in time
When I held your hand in mine
(Beautiful imagery)
Lovely artwork choice. A beautiful tribute to your special Lady.
And so ...
"Below the witness of the stars
in a tender embrace, they kissed.
and they held each other's heart ~ forevermore.
And that's all she wrote ~ LateBloomer"
As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck.
Keep the blue waters flowing.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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Hello fastdigits, your poem is so very romantic and beautifully penned in soft and soulful images. I
especially liked:
In my mind I see your face
from some forgotten dream
Like a picture on a canvas
Shaping images in my mind
(Very lovely. Dreams - a place where all things are possible and all things come to life.)
I also liked:
Now dawn lights up the sky
One last kiss before goodbye
Remaining forever lost in time
When I held your hand in mine
(Beautiful imagery)
Lovely artwork choice. A beautiful tribute to your special Lady.
And so ...
"Below the witness of the stars
in a tender embrace, they kissed.
and they held each other's heart ~ forevermore.
And that's all she wrote ~ LateBloomer"
As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck.
Keep the blue waters flowing.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2017
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Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks glimpses of memoirs enjoying visualization how grave their love has been, in a monologue in the dark night gets promise of love with no biding goodbye; I liked.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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This speaks glimpses of memoirs enjoying visualization how grave their love has been, in a monologue in the dark night gets promise of love with no biding goodbye; I liked.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2017
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