Sweet Melody
5/7/5 romance6 total reviews
Comment from Raul1
Excellent poem! You have the lines perfect and they all rhyme. It is easy to read. I like this poem very much. Excellent work! The right words. Congratulations on winning the contest!
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2018
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Excellent poem! You have the lines perfect and they all rhyme. It is easy to read. I like this poem very much. Excellent work! The right words. Congratulations on winning the contest!
Comment Written 02-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2018
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Well thank you for digging this one up! I appreciate the review! :-)
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You're welcome.
Comment from angel123
I enjoyed reading your unique poem. It flows well with your use of personification of the evening- tides. And your artwork choice goes well with your message. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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I enjoyed reading your unique poem. It flows well with your use of personification of the evening- tides. And your artwork choice goes well with your message. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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Thank you for the sweet review! I appreciate you taking the time to read and review! :-)
Comment from Mustang Patty
Dear Anonymous Poet;
thank you for sharing this well thought out poem for the contest. Your five-seven-five syllable count came out just right. Your presentation was lovely, as were your words.
Good luck in the contest,
~patty~
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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Dear Anonymous Poet;
thank you for sharing this well thought out poem for the contest. Your five-seven-five syllable count came out just right. Your presentation was lovely, as were your words.
Good luck in the contest,
~patty~
Comment Written 06-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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Hi Patty, thank you for such a sweet review! I do appreciate you taking the time to read and review!
Comment from WalkerMan
From the beautifully painted image of a warmly embracing couple, to the perfectly compatible background, to the softly flowing words of two hearts' mutually calming harmony, this delightful post feels like a loving hug that is just one brief part of an endless symphony of love. This is the dream we all want to live, forever. Superb....
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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From the beautifully painted image of a warmly embracing couple, to the perfectly compatible background, to the softly flowing words of two hearts' mutually calming harmony, this delightful post feels like a loving hug that is just one brief part of an endless symphony of love. This is the dream we all want to live, forever. Superb....
Comment Written 06-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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Mike, Thank you for yet another wonderful review. I appreciate you taking the time to do so.Again, ya got the theme of this little poem. :-)
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You are most welcome. These few words are truly beautiful. -- Mike
Comment from Lucian Carter
There is a time to be simple, and there is a time to use flowery language. Here, flowery language rules the day. It works just great. Euphony may be my word of the day. Nice poem. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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There is a time to be simple, and there is a time to use flowery language. Here, flowery language rules the day. It works just great. Euphony may be my word of the day. Nice poem. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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:-) What a sweet review! I'm smiling :-) thank you for taking the time to read and review! I do appreciate it. :-))))
Comment from Hopefully oppressed
I had to google euphony lol. I can't give you pointers on the mechanics of writing but I can tell you how it made me feel.
It reminded me of the very few minutes in the day that my wife and I have alone together. we tend to embrace those few precious moments, I do any way. I will hug her extra hard today. thanks to you
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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I had to google euphony lol. I can't give you pointers on the mechanics of writing but I can tell you how it made me feel.
It reminded me of the very few minutes in the day that my wife and I have alone together. we tend to embrace those few precious moments, I do any way. I will hug her extra hard today. thanks to you
Comment Written 05-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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Thank you for taking the time to read and offer your thoughts on this little poem! I think you should hug your wife extra tight :-) just because.. :-)
