No more dancing
Why I couldn't dance.4 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
Awww! I'm not sure if this is true or not. In any case for all cancer victims, my heart is with them. I think we must always dance, even if it's not the best dance. It would be a tribute to your friend. Marilyn
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2017
Awww! I'm not sure if this is true or not. In any case for all cancer victims, my heart is with them. I think we must always dance, even if it's not the best dance. It would be a tribute to your friend. Marilyn
Comment Written 01-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2017
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Thanks for your comments. It is true that I lost my friend to cancer and it has made an unbearable impact to my life but I do dance whenever I can.
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I am so sorry to hear that. I did assume it was true. Dancing will be a way to honor her. Marilyn
Comment from angel123
I enjoyed reading your 25 words poem. It is well-written with a meaningful message. Your artwork choice goes well with your story and it rhymes well. Best wishes! Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2017
I enjoyed reading your 25 words poem. It is well-written with a meaningful message. Your artwork choice goes well with your story and it rhymes well. Best wishes! Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2017
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Thank you
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written 25 Words poem you have penned about your friend having cancer and that is why you can't dance. You used very good wording and good imagery with the art work. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017
This is a very well written 25 Words poem you have penned about your friend having cancer and that is why you can't dance. You used very good wording and good imagery with the art work. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 30-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017
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Thank you
Comment from kahpot
Excellent you have told a very sad story in this brilliant short write great artwork to compliment, these words very well done and good luck in your competition****kahpot
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017
Excellent you have told a very sad story in this brilliant short write great artwork to compliment, these words very well done and good luck in your competition****kahpot
Comment Written 30-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017
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Thank you.