NFL: 'Nuff Flap Lines
tiresome 'stances' of public figures40 total reviews
Comment from GWinterwin
Good message here in seven words. Also good picture to make it complete. Yes a clear mind certainly does help the kicker to consecrate on the ball and where he wants to hit it.
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Good message here in seven words. Also good picture to make it complete. Yes a clear mind certainly does help the kicker to consecrate on the ball and where he wants to hit it.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2017
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Thanks!
Comment from Walu Feral
G'day Dennis.
How on earth do you write a poem in six little words, Sir? Crikey, you are so clever to be able to tell such a story in a few words. I love it. The truth be told, I think we are all, or most of us, are tired of this world and the politics involved in it. I know I surely am.
Great job, I'm stunned. This would have taken me 400 words to write and say the same thing lol.
Cheers Fez
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G'day Dennis.
How on earth do you write a poem in six little words, Sir? Crikey, you are so clever to be able to tell such a story in a few words. I love it. The truth be told, I think we are all, or most of us, are tired of this world and the politics involved in it. I know I surely am.
Great job, I'm stunned. This would have taken me 400 words to write and say the same thing lol.
Cheers Fez
Comment Written 30-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017
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Thanks old buddy, Fez, but your 400 words would held every ones attention until you were done. I'm for the short attentioned among us...:) God bless you, Dennis
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lol.
Comment from RGstar
Deniz...I would put an 's' on the end of "politic." This does have impact, as should poem of this nature...shap and strong. You have done that.
Well done.
My best wishes.
RGstar
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Deniz...I would put an 's' on the end of "politic." This does have impact, as should poem of this nature...shap and strong. You have done that.
Well done.
My best wishes.
RGstar
Comment Written 30-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017
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Thank you!
Comment from Pantygynt
That's the idea. Keep the verbose character focussed. Such people are not in their positions to be political philosophers. they arre indeed revered for their ball skills, and reminding them of that does no harm whatsoever. They are not the great and the good just great and good at football.
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That's the idea. Keep the verbose character focussed. Such people are not in their positions to be political philosophers. they arre indeed revered for their ball skills, and reminding them of that does no harm whatsoever. They are not the great and the good just great and good at football.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017
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Thank you.
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi Deniz, a well written piece in just six words. Not easy to get a message across with so few words but you have achieved this. I now know what NFL means - Nuff Flap Lines, but to be honest I'm none the wiser LOL. Well written and good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy
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Hi Deniz, a well written piece in just six words. Not easy to get a message across with so few words but you have achieved this. I now know what NFL means - Nuff Flap Lines, but to be honest I'm none the wiser LOL. Well written and good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy
Comment Written 30-Sep-2017
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Thank you, Dorothy!
Comment from Rasmine
Good little poem. I love the end of it. I do see one typo: ball:kick may need a space so 'ball: kick'.
Now politics are pushing their way into sports. I'm not really into sports, but I do believe they both need to be separate.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017
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Good little poem. I love the end of it. I do see one typo: ball:kick may need a space so 'ball: kick'.
Now politics are pushing their way into sports. I'm not really into sports, but I do believe they both need to be separate.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017
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Yes, I need to fix that and thank you, Dennis
Comment from Lulube
Not a lot of ways to say anything never mind provide action in imagery. Well done and good luck in the contest.. Love the different subject, could take it another way if there was no photo. lol\
lulube
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Not a lot of ways to say anything never mind provide action in imagery. Well done and good luck in the contest.. Love the different subject, could take it another way if there was no photo. lol\
lulube
Comment Written 30-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017
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Thanks for a thoughtful review, Dennis
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WELCOME
LULUBE
Comment from c_lucas
Message to the NFL.
Quit kicking the Flag and Country. Take your frustration out on the one carrying the ball. If you really want to help, spend the season in the Caribbean helping those who are not millionaires.
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Message to the NFL.
Quit kicking the Flag and Country. Take your frustration out on the one carrying the ball. If you really want to help, spend the season in the Caribbean helping those who are not millionaires.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2017
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Well said and thank you, Dennis
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Your welcome, Dennis.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Such few words, but they have a mighty kick in them! Your words certainly have impact and I wish you luck with the contest. Concise and punchy! Have a great day, love Dolly x
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Such few words, but they have a mighty kick in them! Your words certainly have impact and I wish you luck with the contest. Concise and punchy! Have a great day, love Dolly x
Comment Written 30-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017
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Thank you so much, Dennis
Comment from Oatmeal
Very nicely written work. You did a wonderful job with this challenge. The word count was within means. The flow was very nice. The theme was good. The artwork complemented your poem.
There was no SPAG, no typos, no room for improvement.
The words you chose worked well.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017
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Very nicely written work. You did a wonderful job with this challenge. The word count was within means. The flow was very nice. The theme was good. The artwork complemented your poem.
There was no SPAG, no typos, no room for improvement.
The words you chose worked well.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 29-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017
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Thank you very much, Dennis