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Comment from Larissa B
This is hilarious. I don't usually look at the photos attached. But that face on the caterpillar says it all. On a side note, I don't suppose lung cancer is permitted to exist in Wonderland. lol! But you're the writer, so...
Larissa
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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This is hilarious. I don't usually look at the photos attached. But that face on the caterpillar says it all. On a side note, I don't suppose lung cancer is permitted to exist in Wonderland. lol! But you're the writer, so...
Larissa
Comment Written 22-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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Father and brother both died from it. Otherwise, they were happy.
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sorry for your loss. my dad too-- pancreatic cancer
Comment from Asem.inspirations
Good morning again, Bill:
Yes, this poem post does have impact. It must have received plenty of attention. I forgot to see how many reviews you received on this one but I am sure it is many.
I see that you won the third place with this entry so good job and congratulations. Seven Words or Less Poem, and you did it with your seven catchy words. The Hookah-smoking is what caught my eye because i see people doing this as if it is so cute. It's just like putting a gun to your head and pulling the trigger. The amount of smoke that they are inhaling into their lungs with these things is alarmingly scary. I feel so bad for their lungs and their health because of it.
Anyway great post! I can see the humor in this and the great message.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2017
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Good morning again, Bill:
Yes, this poem post does have impact. It must have received plenty of attention. I forgot to see how many reviews you received on this one but I am sure it is many.
I see that you won the third place with this entry so good job and congratulations. Seven Words or Less Poem, and you did it with your seven catchy words. The Hookah-smoking is what caught my eye because i see people doing this as if it is so cute. It's just like putting a gun to your head and pulling the trigger. The amount of smoke that they are inhaling into their lungs with these things is alarmingly scary. I feel so bad for their lungs and their health because of it.
Anyway great post! I can see the humor in this and the great message.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2017
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Thank you, Tier, for the positive review. This one needed an impressive image, but most of the Alice in Wonderland caterpillar images are goofy. This one seemed to match the gravitas of the implication.
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It sure did.
Comment from smileycloud
meanest looking bug ever seen
very funny stuff
good work for the contest
have a smiley day
congratulations on the third
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017
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meanest looking bug ever seen
very funny stuff
good work for the contest
have a smiley day
congratulations on the third
Comment Written 30-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017
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Thank you, SC.
Comment from sunnilicious
Great short narrative poem.
There are plenty herbal hookahs that do not have any tobacco. I live in an area where it is a big hangout thing. This vapor craze has multiple levels. I don't right it, because the ingredients are not from the USA. It's middle eastern and north african inspired and many dealers import to sell.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2017
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Great short narrative poem.
There are plenty herbal hookahs that do not have any tobacco. I live in an area where it is a big hangout thing. This vapor craze has multiple levels. I don't right it, because the ingredients are not from the USA. It's middle eastern and north african inspired and many dealers import to sell.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2017
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Thank you, sunnilicious, for the interesting review. Bill
Comment from Lucian Carter
LOL! Dark and whimsical at the same time. That's a great emotional high to hit. The hyphen could be considered a cheat, but it feels appropriate. Nice picture, is it from the original book?
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2017
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LOL! Dark and whimsical at the same time. That's a great emotional high to hit. The hyphen could be considered a cheat, but it feels appropriate. Nice picture, is it from the original book?
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2017
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I'm assured that hyphenated words are one word. If I wrote a sentence that said...It was a farmer-in-the-dell scenario. ... that would be five words.The picture is from the newest movie version.
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Makes sense.
Comment from His Grayness
This work is really well introduced with excellent artwork and coloration. The dialog is intentionally very brief in compliance with contest rules so not much can be said about it, other than it gets the job done and keeps the reader engaged fully....at least for the little time intended. HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2017
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This work is really well introduced with excellent artwork and coloration. The dialog is intentionally very brief in compliance with contest rules so not much can be said about it, other than it gets the job done and keeps the reader engaged fully....at least for the little time intended. HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment Written 28-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2017
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Thanks, Vance, for the great review.
Comment from rspoet
This is a solid entry for the contest with the correct syllables
A good anti-smoking ad, so much for wonderland
Excellent picture to match
Good luck in the voting
RS
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2017
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This is a solid entry for the contest with the correct syllables
A good anti-smoking ad, so much for wonderland
Excellent picture to match
Good luck in the voting
RS
Comment Written 28-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2017
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Thanks, RS