The Assassinator
How Bad Can It Be contest entry5 total reviews
Comment from smileycloud
I read stories before the notes
I thought it was a good short short story speaking just like an in old fashioned Chicago gangster movie
I thought it was great all on it's own
LOL
good luck in the contest
I did read the prompt rules after that and thought perhaps you did it just a fraction too well but a fine vote contender
have a smiley day
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017
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I read stories before the notes
I thought it was a good short short story speaking just like an in old fashioned Chicago gangster movie
I thought it was great all on it's own
LOL
good luck in the contest
I did read the prompt rules after that and thought perhaps you did it just a fraction too well but a fine vote contender
have a smiley day
Comment Written 30-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Smiley C. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this silly thing. You have a great day as well.
Comment from Lucian Carter
A first person sentence from the mind of a moron. What a wonderful entry into a contest to write a terrible opening line. Assassinator may be my new favorite word. Thanks for daring to be bad. Best of luck.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2017
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A first person sentence from the mind of a moron. What a wonderful entry into a contest to write a terrible opening line. Assassinator may be my new favorite word. Thanks for daring to be bad. Best of luck.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2017
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Thank you for the excellent review, Lucian. Yeah, I had to go at this from a simpletons point of view, lol. I really appreciate the gracious stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this ridiculous thing. You're welcome to use assassinator all you want. Haha. Thank you again. Have a great day.
Comment from Octavia
LOL, mystery author. I just couldn't stop laughing. That was pretty, pretty, pretty bad. In fact, it was deliciously awful.
Best of luck in the contest.
<< still laughing>>
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2017
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LOL, mystery author. I just couldn't stop laughing. That was pretty, pretty, pretty bad. In fact, it was deliciously awful.
Best of luck in the contest.
<< still laughing>>
Comment Written 28-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2017
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Thank you for the fantastic review and for throwing the contest, Octavia. I had fun with it. I really appreciate the gracious stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silliness. I know I sure did writing it, haha. Have a great day.
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
Now this is the best of the worst I've read so far. the worrying thing is this is well written, but is still completely atrocious. I'm sure I've read this very thing, but for real.
very nice
GMG
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2017
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Hi there,
Now this is the best of the worst I've read so far. the worrying thing is this is well written, but is still completely atrocious. I'm sure I've read this very thing, but for real.
very nice
GMG
Comment Written 28-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2017
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Wow, thank you for the great review, GMG. I never figured I'd see a big sixer for this silliness. I really appreciate it, friend. You made my day. I'm glad you liked my little addition to the contest. Have a great day. Thank you again.
Comment from F. Wehr3
I think you did an exceptionally awful job in this sentence, lol. What an idea for contest, huh. Best of luck with this one. It should be interesting.
Take care,
Russell
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2017
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I think you did an exceptionally awful job in this sentence, lol. What an idea for contest, huh. Best of luck with this one. It should be interesting.
Take care,
Russell
Comment Written 28-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2017
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Haha. Thank you for the great review, Russell. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this silly thing.