Comment from DR DIP

Excellent

Bill that is so cute( am i allowed to say that as a bloke lol)
its the perfect little ditty that has more meaning hidden under these delightful lines there is an underlying meaning.
The road we take in life is full of many challenges sometimes flat sometimes rocky some times smooth but forever changing. We must take on life's hurdles and hills.

thanks for sharing

dip

 Comment Written 29-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Sep-2017

Thanks, DD

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Bill Schott,
what an amazing original poem about how determined a
Caterpillar more than anything no matter how steep or difficult the sloop is -- desires to turn into a butter fly

How I wish I had a six to give to you
Oh a terrific graphic ( so colorful)

Gert

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2017

Thank you,Gert, for the great review. Bill

reply by Gert sherwood on 28-Sep-2017

You are welcome Bill
Gert

Gert

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Oh I really like this one. It shows the "do or die" spirit that we are all challenged with, even caterpillars. Good rhyming throughout and even carries a message of perseverance and winning. Marilyn

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2017

Thanks, Marilyn, for the excellent review.Bill

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Wow Bill, that was a surprisingly upbeat and encouraging piece. Every word you wrote showed an incredibly positive thought that is not what one would expect from a battle hardened Jyrene. I guess you really cannot ever tell who will become or do what before they become or do whatever they do or become. Hunh?

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2017

I stepped a caterpillar yesterday to bring balance to the universe.

reply by nomi338 on 28-Sep-2017

hurrah!

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written tribute to the caterpillar that do everything in his power until he dies to make sure the butterfly comes to life and flies all over in the sky to spread pollen over the fields.

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2017

Thank you, Sandra, for the nice review, Bill

Comment from marybell1

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your poem "Caterpillar World." You rhymed it well with an interesting outlook along with an unusual photo.
All the best.
Marybell1.

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2017

Thanks, MB

reply by marybell1 on 28-Sep-2017

You are most welcome.
Marybell1.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

What a sweet and encouraging poem using the lowly caterpillar as a metaphor for us humans with our own uphill climbs as well as joyful flat roads in life. Well done!

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2017

Thanks, lyenochka

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Oh yes my friend this is well written and indeed very original you used the picture well giving it meaning I enjoyed
well done regards Jill

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2017

Thanks, Mrs P

Comment from frogbook

Excellent

A definite favorite from the picture on down to the last line. Hopeful and encouraging words well spoken. And such truth about the road we travel.

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2017

Thanks, FB

Comment from Kerry Foley

Excellent

This is a great poem on the determination of the caterpillar, Bill, nicely done!
"Like the caterpillar, though we push on, do or die" Life must go on:)) ~Kerry

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2017

Thanks, Kerry. Bill

reply by Kerry Foley on 02-Oct-2017

Your welcome:)