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Comment from Pearl Edwards
Good fun if it wasn't for the hangover he'll have. A different way to look at this blackout challenge, and fun to read.
cheers.
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Good fun if it wasn't for the hangover he'll have. A different way to look at this blackout challenge, and fun to read.
cheers.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2017
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
Oh, I wouldn't know anything about this state of mind, I'm sure! LOL. This is a seriously mixed up guy who probably should give up drinking. You've written quite a catchy story here that wants to be explored. Good luck with it, Mikey. Cheers, Giddy
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Oh, I wouldn't know anything about this state of mind, I'm sure! LOL. This is a seriously mixed up guy who probably should give up drinking. You've written quite a catchy story here that wants to be explored. Good luck with it, Mikey. Cheers, Giddy
Comment Written 27-Sep-2017
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hello Michael. What a crazy little write and for you I imagine a wonderful dream sequence. Should you get plastered? Had me laughing and thinking, oh I bet he will! Good luck. An adorable write. xoxo Kiwi
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Hello Michael. What a crazy little write and for you I imagine a wonderful dream sequence. Should you get plastered? Had me laughing and thinking, oh I bet he will! Good luck. An adorable write. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 26-Sep-2017
Comment from Mabaker
How am I supposed to review such a short piece?
I get the drift of the story mostly sex. Ah, well they say it makes the world turn. Perhaps. That's the best I can do. I hope he recalls something of last night. Regards Mabaker
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How am I supposed to review such a short piece?
I get the drift of the story mostly sex. Ah, well they say it makes the world turn. Perhaps. That's the best I can do. I hope he recalls something of last night. Regards Mabaker
Comment Written 26-Sep-2017
Comment from LIJ Red
Ah. Different kind of blackout. I was thinking electrical. This made me think of Pena in Jacob's Ladder. Yep, excellent flash fiction.
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Ah. Different kind of blackout. I was thinking electrical. This made me think of Pena in Jacob's Ladder. Yep, excellent flash fiction.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2017
Comment from amada
Hilarious satire, I just love this line "I'm off to work. See ya for the rematch, tonight." Fast and furious work about a night that was. Great way to tell it.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2017
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Hilarious satire, I just love this line "I'm off to work. See ya for the rematch, tonight." Fast and furious work about a night that was. Great way to tell it.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2017
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Hi, great to see you. Sorry I'm so behind. Delighted you liked this. Lots of fun. Thanks so much. mike
Comment from robina1978
Nice girl in the photo that complements your script so well. It is nice and short, but tells a lot about the two people involved. The made love. She enjoyed it, he could not remember as he was too drunk. He wonders if he should drink before the next encounter,
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2017
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Nice girl in the photo that complements your script so well. It is nice and short, but tells a lot about the two people involved. The made love. She enjoyed it, he could not remember as he was too drunk. He wonders if he should drink before the next encounter,
Comment Written 25-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2017
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Thanks so much, Ine. You have it on the money. :)) mike
Comment from Scarbrems
Ha, ha, ha, very good. No idea what 'drabble' is, but I'm sure this is an excellent example. Made me smile, anyway. Most of the time, people would prefer not to remember the shit they did when drunk, lol.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2017
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Ha, ha, ha, very good. No idea what 'drabble' is, but I'm sure this is an excellent example. Made me smile, anyway. Most of the time, people would prefer not to remember the shit they did when drunk, lol.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2017
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None of us knows what "drabble" is. HA! We all just write 100 word stories and cross our fingers. I usually don't want to know. But in THIS case I sure would. LOL! Thanks a million. mike
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written drabble fiction. This blackout has two scenarios. The lights went out and you had a great time with someone but you have a total blackout and you can't remember what is the great time the girl us talking about.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2017
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A very well-written drabble fiction. This blackout has two scenarios. The lights went out and you had a great time with someone but you have a total blackout and you can't remember what is the great time the girl us talking about.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2017
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Yep ... I'm just hoping I can give her the same "good time" if I'm sober. HAAAHAHA! Thanks a million. mike
Comment from poetsteve15
I hope you are working on how to quit drunking if you can not remember your own kid. that would be time to stop. like maybe last night your last drink honey you really do have stop now.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2017
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I hope you are working on how to quit drunking if you can not remember your own kid. that would be time to stop. like maybe last night your last drink honey you really do have stop now.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2017
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HA! Indeed. Actually, I don't drink. Just a made up story for fun to fit the challenge. You should check out the prose potlatch in the Challenges forum. This week it's a 100 word story and the topic is "blackouts". I took it to a strange place I admit. Thanks for stopping by. :)) mike