Comment from nancyjam

Excellent

I enjoyed your poem with
it's delightful choice of words and rhyme
about the caterpillar.
Great use of alliteration throughout.
I loved "from knee-o-phyte
butter flight
super worm to mini-kite"
So clever!
Nancy

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2017

Thank you, Nancy

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very interesting and very colorful poem you have penned about the caterpillars. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2017

Thanks, Teri

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Hello my friend you created a poem that works with the colourful art choice using good word choices through the poem well done regards Jill

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2017

Thanks, Jill, for the excellent review. Bill

Comment from robina1978

Excellent

The artwork is very nice and complements your number 3 poem about caterpillars perfectly. I see some rhyme, and how he turns into a butterfly. I don't quite get why you say he is a psychedelic dream installer.

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2017

Thanks for giving this a look, Ine. I was inspired by the jazzy artwork to write that. Happy day.

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Wow! Well that was an exciting display of rhyming. I think it is safe to say that you can cast a mean rhyme. You have managed to make the Caterpillar into something of a dynamic superstar, capable of doing many and mighty things. Good work.

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2017

Thanks, nomi

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

I think you've chosen the perfect artwork to accompany your fun, tongue-twisting poem on the caterpillar. This is a unique and amusing poem to read aloud. What's next? Marilyn

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 24-Sep-2017

Thanks, Marilyn. Still looking for something new. Bill

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Love the sounds of this poem. Even though a child may not know "psychedelic" I think children would love reading and saying this poem. I especially liked your work play in :

From knee-o-phyte
to butter flight
super worm to mini-kite

Enjoyed this very much!

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 24-Sep-2017

Thanks, Helen, for giving this a look. Bill

Comment from damommy

Excellent

Great rhyming throughout. It would be hard to pick out one part as a favorite. I did especially like 'butter flight.'

The different colored words was a good touch. Somehow, it gave more impact to the words. 8-)

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 24-Sep-2017

Thanks, da, for the excellent review. Bill

Comment from nbonner

Excellent

Great imagery, descriptive words used in this poem. Caterpillars are such amazing creatures. Thank you for sharing and best wishes, NB

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 24-Sep-2017

Thanks, NB, for the excellent review. Bill

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Bill,
This is a great poem--love the picture--it is a psychedelic caterpillar for sure. Your words were fun to read. I like the 2 color font. I don't hate caterpillars. I just don't like them near me. Your words were well-chosen to describe this much aligned thing. I like the alliteration & the flow of words just like a caterpillar was crawling by. Thanks for sharing. Jan

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 24-Sep-2017

Thanks, Jan, for the excellent review. Bill