Grieving Hearts
Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "Five Crystal Hearts "My sad Heart emoting @utilizing it's 'Heart-Brain'
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Comment from Liberty Justice
SIX STARS DEAR POET. Love your script so emotional and devoted the way each character plays his or her part so well. Has overtone of sprituality and great sucess teaches a moral. WELL DONE LOL
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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SIX STARS DEAR POET. Love your script so emotional and devoted the way each character plays his or her part so well. Has overtone of sprituality and great sucess teaches a moral. WELL DONE LOL
Comment Written 22-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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Thanks Darling.
'There are so many that won't release the stars for Great Writings."
Dr. Ricky 1024.
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Yes perhaps your poet friend can get the green star sometimes too. I'm back writing and just posted two more poems. See my last 3. lolol liberty justice
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"No Problemo" but your work is not coming up."
"Request me again."
Ricky...i
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
This is one of your best ones that I have read. It delved into more of your life and the ones closest to your heart. Very well done
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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This is one of your best ones that I have read. It delved into more of your life and the ones closest to your heart. Very well done
Comment Written 22-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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Thanks from me, My Four Daughters...
And, My Late Son, and my Late Wife...
Ricky...
Comment from Walu Feral
G'day Ricky.
Well done, mate. As you say... You thought life lasts forever... sometimes I do and sometimes I don't.
But in reality nothing lasts forever, just look at all the animals that have become extinct, with more on the way.
Great job.
Cheers Fez
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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G'day Ricky.
Well done, mate. As you say... You thought life lasts forever... sometimes I do and sometimes I don't.
But in reality nothing lasts forever, just look at all the animals that have become extinct, with more on the way.
Great job.
Cheers Fez
Comment Written 22-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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So true Walu and thanks.
Dr. Ricky 1024.
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
Writers often have what I call 'crystal hearts'/ It is as if they are born with their nerves on the outside and are very sensitive people. I liked this very much Ricky and you have obviously been working on your poetry. It makes a lot more sense and was enjoyable indeed lovely to read the image of five crystal hearts. Well done kindest regards Meia xx
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2017
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Writers often have what I call 'crystal hearts'/ It is as if they are born with their nerves on the outside and are very sensitive people. I liked this very much Ricky and you have obviously been working on your poetry. It makes a lot more sense and was enjoyable indeed lovely to read the image of five crystal hearts. Well done kindest regards Meia xx
Comment Written 22-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2017
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Actually Miss Meia,
"The only time I stopped working on my Poetry was in 2006...
"December 1st, 2006 at 9:00 AM. when I took a knife to my Heart Twice hitting the Valve...
"My Neck thrice...
"Missing "The Jugular.'
"Damn it!"
"And downed a bottle of pills...
"Afterwards within a few weeks?"
"I survive and started writing again...
"Immediately!"
"Triple Suicide Dance!"
"Will you dance with me?"
"Miss Meia?"
"After you realize there's another part to "Five, Crystal, Hearts?"
Ricky...
