Stage Show
Highlights10 total reviews
Comment from sunnilicious
Wonderful visual imagery created. Nice play on words in the last line. Well thought out and clearly written. Great work. And congratulations for taking home the winning blue ribbon.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2017
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Wonderful visual imagery created. Nice play on words in the last line. Well thought out and clearly written. Great work. And congratulations for taking home the winning blue ribbon.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2017
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Thank you for your wonderful review.
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Stage Show, has the correct set up and reflects the natural sparkles of living on or near the water and the grand light shows available there. Nice.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2017
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This 5-7-5, Stage Show, has the correct set up and reflects the natural sparkles of living on or near the water and the grand light shows available there. Nice.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2017
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Thanks so much.
Comment from country ranch writer
Now that is what I call a beautiful set up for this one that can stand alone on its own merit of the sparkles across the wanted a beautiful sight that to behold.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2017
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Now that is what I call a beautiful set up for this one that can stand alone on its own merit of the sparkles across the wanted a beautiful sight that to behold.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2017
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Thank you, I always love hearing from you, county ranch writer.
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Comment from l.raven
you are so very right...there are so many things in the world that should make you feel good...I love your poem...and your notes are soooo true...very nicely written...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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you are so very right...there are so many things in the world that should make you feel good...I love your poem...and your notes are soooo true...very nicely written...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 23-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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Thank you for your encouraging review.
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you are soooo very welcome...xxoo love
Comment from BeasPeas
It is a natural high to see such glorious sights of nature, the simplest thing of sunlight on a crystal clear lake. Nicely constructed. Much luck in the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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It is a natural high to see such glorious sights of nature, the simplest thing of sunlight on a crystal clear lake. Nicely constructed. Much luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 23-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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Thank yo for your kind words.
Comment from nartoonla
Hi, Wow the photo you chose is beautiful! And lines matching. Did not yet grasp the ending well. A natural high...? But write simpler things. Have not reached the higher level of inspiration. Regards nartoon
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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Hi, Wow the photo you chose is beautiful! And lines matching. Did not yet grasp the ending well. A natural high...? But write simpler things. Have not reached the higher level of inspiration. Regards nartoon
Comment Written 23-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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It means you don't have to get drunk or take drugs just to feel good. Thanks for your review.
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Ah, indeed... naturally stone so grasped not. Thanks and take care!
Comment from smileycloud
Such a huge amount of expression imagery
message and profound pleasure in nature
excellently squeezed into a few short lines
well done
good luck in the contest
have a smiley day
clove your summing up in your closing line by the way
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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Such a huge amount of expression imagery
message and profound pleasure in nature
excellently squeezed into a few short lines
well done
good luck in the contest
have a smiley day
clove your summing up in your closing line by the way
Comment Written 23-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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Thank you so much.
Comment from Lucian Carter
Beautiful piece. Just reading it makes me feel warm and relaxed. Natural highs are always the best. The punctuation is perfect, the lines flow well and fit the form.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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Beautiful piece. Just reading it makes me feel warm and relaxed. Natural highs are always the best. The punctuation is perfect, the lines flow well and fit the form.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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Thanks, your review made me happy.
Comment from rspoet
This is a fine 5-7-5 poem and entry for the contest
with the correct syllables and excellent imagery
of the sunlight and crystal lake.
Nature provides the best "high"
Excellent picture to match
Well done
Good luck in the contest
RS
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2017
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This is a fine 5-7-5 poem and entry for the contest
with the correct syllables and excellent imagery
of the sunlight and crystal lake.
Nature provides the best "high"
Excellent picture to match
Well done
Good luck in the contest
RS
Comment Written 22-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2017
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from patcelaw
This is a beautiful haiku both in wording and in the presentation. Good luck in the contest. Have a blessed and wonder filled weekend. Patricia
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2017
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This is a beautiful haiku both in wording and in the presentation. Good luck in the contest. Have a blessed and wonder filled weekend. Patricia
Comment Written 22-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2017
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Thank you for your lovely review.
