old cowboy
cribbage and whiskey3 total reviews
Comment from honeytree
History on earth
is great to remember
in many ways.
Our personal memories
can still be recalled
Memories of many
dying when at war
their is a lot to remember.
Honey tree
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History on earth
is great to remember
in many ways.
Our personal memories
can still be recalled
Memories of many
dying when at war
their is a lot to remember.
Honey tree
Comment Written 22-Sep-2017
Comment from His Grayness
I Found the artwork and coloration to be a great benefit to this work, although the dialog seemed to stumble a bit here and there, perhaps by intention. The font presentation made the work very readable and colorful so it was very well done overall. My thanks to this author for a fine read! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
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I Found the artwork and coloration to be a great benefit to this work, although the dialog seemed to stumble a bit here and there, perhaps by intention. The font presentation made the work very readable and colorful so it was very well done overall. My thanks to this author for a fine read! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment Written 19-Sep-2017
Comment from humpwhistle
I can't say I got much out of reading this. The lack of punctuation, even line breaks, frustrated my ability to shape it into something I can recognize.
But, I assume you know what you're doing, and the fault lies with me.
Peace, Lee
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I can't say I got much out of reading this. The lack of punctuation, even line breaks, frustrated my ability to shape it into something I can recognize.
But, I assume you know what you're doing, and the fault lies with me.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 19-Sep-2017