Comment from
honeytree
The art work is great
in everyway for the words
life can be a gift to us all
sometimes life can bring
back memories to ponder on
Really life can be a mixture
of all sorts of things.
Honey tree
Comment Written 22-Sep-2017
Comment from
His Grayness
I found this work somewhat difficult to follow as the dialog seemed to be not well connected throughout, so I'm either missing some style that is rare or just finding the writing difficult. HIS GRAYNESS;
Comment Written 19-Sep-2017
Comment from
oliver818
Great poem, I enjoyed it. It flows well and the imagery is very powerful and evocative. I especially enjoyed the ending. Thanks for sharing and have a great day
Comment Written 19-Sep-2017