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My loss of my only son Jason.
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Comment from
Janilou
This is very sad, and very heartbreaking. The gift of life in organ donation is so bittersweet. It is truly a noble gift, and a worthy one. I am sorry for your loss. I cannot and do not want to imagine having to go through the loss of a child. I doubt anything could be worse.
I do not have any suggestions for edits or corrections.
All the best,
Jan
Comment Written 13-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2017
Thanks Janilou.
"No one figures a thing like that would happen to You?
"And, when it does?"
Dr. Ricky 1024
Comment from
Meia (MESAYERS)
From what I was able to glean from your 'individual' way of writing you have been to hell and back. I hope life is better for you now. This is hard to read because of the way it is formatted but I think I got the jist. bless you Ricky. Kindest regards meia x
Comment Written 13-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2017
Sorry that you had a problem Love...
'With this one.
Basically, it's about "Grief" but deeper...
"If You ever want to Learn more...
"Just Hit me up here, Facebook, my Yahoo...
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'My Birthday Is October 24th...
32 B.C.
Ricky....
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