Sonnets
Viewing comments for Chapter 24 "Like I Can Fly"A collection of sonnets
18 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Lovely sonnet of romance lost. I can't really comment on the formula for sonnets as I suck at them and try to avoid writing them, I just know I enjoyed this read, and leave as -
love grows wings to soar -
well done and good luck in the contest.
cheers.
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Lovely sonnet of romance lost. I can't really comment on the formula for sonnets as I suck at them and try to avoid writing them, I just know I enjoyed this read, and leave as -
love grows wings to soar -
well done and good luck in the contest.
cheers.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2017
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, Michael,
Beautiful sonnet, you did a great job. I don't think it's predictable at all. You paint a lovely picture with your well chosen words. Good luck with the contest.
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Hello, Michael,
Beautiful sonnet, you did a great job. I don't think it's predictable at all. You paint a lovely picture with your well chosen words. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2017
Comment from frierajac
I like the expression although it does seem to adhere to convention, making it predictable. I have just been reading a current book, "Irresistable Sonnets" Ed by Mar Meriam and not all of the #'s are in 10 syllable lines. They are really amazing. By currently well known writers, if you.ve a mind to look it up.
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I like the expression although it does seem to adhere to convention, making it predictable. I have just been reading a current book, "Irresistable Sonnets" Ed by Mar Meriam and not all of the #'s are in 10 syllable lines. They are really amazing. By currently well known writers, if you.ve a mind to look it up.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2017
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
Well done, Mikey. I don't read many sites from you. What am I saying? I don't read many summits! At all. Still they are one of my favourites, and I think this is great. You really told her, didn't you? You are quite the poet when you want to be, Hope you are well, Giddy
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Well done, Mikey. I don't read many sites from you. What am I saying? I don't read many summits! At all. Still they are one of my favourites, and I think this is great. You really told her, didn't you? You are quite the poet when you want to be, Hope you are well, Giddy
Comment Written 11-Sep-2017
Comment from Irish Rain
I think this is a lovely sonnet, and I especially love that it's not all weepy. He scoffs at suicide, and he'll fly without her, thank you very much!! Love it!!! A great entry, beautiful presentation!! Blessings...
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I think this is a lovely sonnet, and I especially love that it's not all weepy. He scoffs at suicide, and he'll fly without her, thank you very much!! Love it!!! A great entry, beautiful presentation!! Blessings...
Comment Written 11-Sep-2017
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Your contest entry shows off your wonderful poetic talent. You outdid your self with this entry. The flow was smooth and image you painted with words was outstanding. Good luck with the contest.
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Your contest entry shows off your wonderful poetic talent. You outdid your self with this entry. The flow was smooth and image you painted with words was outstanding. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2017
Comment from dragonpoet
This seems this partner wants to stay to see a breakdown. The speaker knows this and tells her to leave and that the breakup is her fault. It seems that he has found a new love.
Good luck and keep writing
dp
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This seems this partner wants to stay to see a breakdown. The speaker knows this and tells her to leave and that the breakup is her fault. It seems that he has found a new love.
Good luck and keep writing
dp
Comment Written 11-Sep-2017
Comment from nancyjam
Great Sonnet entry, Michael.
Good Sonnet form as to rhyme and meter.
Like the way the speaker handles the end of a
relationship. Shows strength, letting the one who left know
he will survive just fine.
Beautiful illustration too.
Good luck in the contest.
Nancy
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Great Sonnet entry, Michael.
Good Sonnet form as to rhyme and meter.
Like the way the speaker handles the end of a
relationship. Shows strength, letting the one who left know
he will survive just fine.
Beautiful illustration too.
Good luck in the contest.
Nancy
Comment Written 11-Sep-2017
Comment from fastdigits
Beautifully done. An artistically written tale
of broken love that you have painted with words
of poetic majesty that brings forth the pain when
a heart is broken.
Well done
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Beautifully done. An artistically written tale
of broken love that you have painted with words
of poetic majesty that brings forth the pain when
a heart is broken.
Well done
Comment Written 11-Sep-2017
Comment from patcelaw
Michael, it appears to me that you did well with the sonnet format. I am not overly fond of sonnets, I suppose because when in senior English classes we had to read so many of them.
Blessings and good luck in the contest. Patricia
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Michael, it appears to me that you did well with the sonnet format. I am not overly fond of sonnets, I suppose because when in senior English classes we had to read so many of them.
Blessings and good luck in the contest. Patricia
Comment Written 11-Sep-2017
