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Animal poetry and short stories

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Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
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Oh yes my friend this is very funny I like the picture you have chosen I think you are a natural at writing humor well done again regards Jill

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2017


reply by the author on 11-Sep-2017
    Thank you, Jill, for the excellent review. Bill
Comment from nomi338
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Oh no! It;s skunk dog, his farts are so powerful they melt the hair inside your nostrils. Spray that puppy down with a gallon of smell good. If that don't do the job then grab some apple cider vinegar and bacon soda and douse him in that. If that don't do the job then run his stinking behind out of town and let him stink somebody else out of house and home.

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2017


reply by the author on 10-Sep-2017
    I should have him fetch dynamite with a short fuse.
Comment from Ulla
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Hi Bill, I'm glad to hear it that neither were hurt. Great Pranka as you can only can write them. I think your skunk series is fabulous. Keep them coming. All the best. Ulla:))

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2017


reply by the author on 10-Sep-2017
    Thanks, Ulla
Comment from Poetic Friend
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Bill,

I see you have chosen the skunk, another animal with unfavorable characteristics.

This poem comes bearing humor. The artwork complements your poem so well.

I like your assonance (pitchfork and torch) and the internal rhymes (porch and torch).

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2017


reply by the author on 10-Sep-2017
    Thanks, PF, for giving this a look. Bill
Comment from Mustang Patty
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Ouch! So glad you put the disclaimer on there, or I though I might have to hunt you down! Poor dogs - they get the blame for all gas - whether it is their's or not. At least at our house,

~patty~

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2017


reply by the author on 09-Sep-2017
    Thank you, Patty, for giving this a look. Bill
Comment from BOO ghost
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Oops, more little stinkers. yep,some dogs can really pack a wallop on that thar' gas. bottle that and you got rocket fuel! that would make a nice Halloween outfit. You can find the pictures Mr. Bill. BOO gives credit where credit is due. yep,lets not the animal activists mad. watch out for them poop land mines too! BOO-amazing!

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2017


reply by the author on 09-Sep-2017
    Thanks, BOO, for the excellent review. Bill
Comment from damommy
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Well, maybe they weren't harmed physically, but you hurt t heir feelings. lol

Such a cute poem with the dog dressed like a skunk.

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2017


reply by the author on 09-Sep-2017
    Thanks, da, for the excellent review. Bill
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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haha this was funny in a weird way. I know you would never do that to a [your] dog. The picture is really cute if skunks are cute. Dogs are so a dog disguised as a skunk must be cute.

I enjoyed your fun poem. Thanks Bill for sharing Jan

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2017


reply by the author on 09-Sep-2017
    Thank you, Jan, for giving this a look. Bill
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very interesting and cute poem you have penned about the dog dressed up like a skunk. Too cute. Very cute wording and I love the art work you chose. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2017


reply by the author on 09-Sep-2017
    Thanks, Teri