Desire Unfolds
whale obsession gone4 total reviews
Comment from kittykct
This dialogue is interesting to read. It's nicely matched to the beautiful picture. It follows the writing prompt and tells the story well. Clever solution to the problem of Moby Dick. Kitty
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2017
This dialogue is interesting to read. It's nicely matched to the beautiful picture. It follows the writing prompt and tells the story well. Clever solution to the problem of Moby Dick. Kitty
Comment Written 27-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2017
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Thanks for reading and an encouraging review. Elaine
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Oh I like this one and the mermaid saves the day.lol
Very well written and a cute piece for all ages. Totally rocks with a perfect ending
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
Oh I like this one and the mermaid saves the day.lol
Very well written and a cute piece for all ages. Totally rocks with a perfect ending
Comment Written 04-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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So glad you enjoyed this unusual tale of Ahab. Thanks so much for a great review. Elaine
Comment from country ranch writer
BEAUTIFUL SCENERY AND GREAT PRESENTATION FOR THIS DIALOGUE, I AM GOING TO TRY MY HAND ME THINKS ON THIS ONE AND SEE IF I TOO CAND DO IT JUSTICE WE SHALL SEE
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
BEAUTIFUL SCENERY AND GREAT PRESENTATION FOR THIS DIALOGUE, I AM GOING TO TRY MY HAND ME THINKS ON THIS ONE AND SEE IF I TOO CAND DO IT JUSTICE WE SHALL SEE
Comment Written 04-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine
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smiles
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Smiles
Comment from c_lucas
Seeking a white whale through horrific waters is not the best thing to do. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. There is good imagery.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
Seeking a white whale through horrific waters is not the best thing to do. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. There is good imagery.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine
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You're welcome, M. Charlie