Sweet Innocence
1-6-1 Poem13 total reviews
Comment from kathleenspalding
Because we'd die of exhaustion otherwise, LOL! But yes, they are the best times, aren't they? Very cute 1-6-1 with excellent artwork, message, and visual display.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2017
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Because we'd die of exhaustion otherwise, LOL! But yes, they are the best times, aren't they? Very cute 1-6-1 with excellent artwork, message, and visual display.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2017
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Know what you mean. Had grandsons during summer vacation. Fun but exhausting! Thanks for reviewing!
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You're welcome :-)
Comment from Dean Kuch
It certainly seems that way, doesn't it, Anonymous Poet?
Children grow up far too quickly in this day and age.
Your 1-6-1 conveys a message many of us can relate to.
I wish you well in the contest.
~Dean
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2017
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It certainly seems that way, doesn't it, Anonymous Poet?
Children grow up far too quickly in this day and age.
Your 1-6-1 conveys a message many of us can relate to.
I wish you well in the contest.
~Dean
Comment Written 03-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2017
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Thank you, Dean. Tempus fugit . And the older we get, time flies even faster!
Comment from Curly Girly
Hi, I enjoyed reading your nostalgic verse:
Why
do childhood years fly by?
Sigh
This was a tough challenge to meet, but I think you did a good job with it.
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2017
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Hi, I enjoyed reading your nostalgic verse:
Why
do childhood years fly by?
Sigh
This was a tough challenge to meet, but I think you did a good job with it.
Best wishes.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2017
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Thank you very much!
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Oh yes my friend a question that well all ask as we approach old age where have those years gone too I enjoyed good luck regards Jill
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2017
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Oh yes my friend a question that well all ask as we approach old age where have those years gone too I enjoyed good luck regards Jill
Comment Written 02-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2017
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Thank you for your kind consideration.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 1-6-1 poem. Childhood years go by so quicklyvit feels like a dream. Our children's years seem to fly even faster by and before we know they have children of their own.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2017
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A very well-written 1-6-1 poem. Childhood years go by so quicklyvit feels like a dream. Our children's years seem to fly even faster by and before we know they have children of their own.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2017
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So true. Appreciate your insights.
Comment from Irish Rain
So very quickly too! Seems like just yesterday my son was a baby, now he's 35. Oh, to have the time back! Lovely entry, blessings....
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2017
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So very quickly too! Seems like just yesterday my son was a baby, now he's 35. Oh, to have the time back! Lovely entry, blessings....
Comment Written 01-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2017
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Thank you!
Comment from Thal1959
I don't care much for the briefer forms since one doesn't have enough to do anything with. But you did a good one here. Love the pic. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2017
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I don't care much for the briefer forms since one doesn't have enough to do anything with. But you did a good one here. Love the pic. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2017
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It was a challenge to create something that made sense. I don't particularly care for the short ones either. Thank you taking the time to read and review.
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You're welcome - it was my pleasure.
Comment from B.B. Rose
I like how you captured that enormous feeling of regret in those few words. Wonderfully done. ........................................................B.B. Rose
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2017
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I like how you captured that enormous feeling of regret in those few words. Wonderfully done. ........................................................B.B. Rose
Comment Written 01-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2017
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Thank you for your encouraging and insightful review!
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written 1-6-1 poem you have penned for the contest. I love the art work of the small child and the very good wording. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2017
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This is a very well written 1-6-1 poem you have penned for the contest. I love the art work of the small child and the very good wording. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 01-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2017
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Thank you so much!
Comment from mermaids
Excellent 1-6-1 form that describes the childhood years going by fast. As an adult, one sees the children in the family grow up fast. Excellent theme for a poem that many can relate to.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2017
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Excellent 1-6-1 form that describes the childhood years going by fast. As an adult, one sees the children in the family grow up fast. Excellent theme for a poem that many can relate to.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2017
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So true. Thank you for your positive feedback!
