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Comment from nomi338
Just be sure that you are away from the spraying end when you choose to toss him because one good spray from can ruin the rest of your week. You won't enjoy any thin you sniff for the foreseeable future. On that you can bet.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2017
Just be sure that you are away from the spraying end when you choose to toss him because one good spray from can ruin the rest of your week. You won't enjoy any thin you sniff for the foreseeable future. On that you can bet.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2017
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Pull pin and throw. The pin is a clothes pin for the nose.
Comment from BOO ghost
Pew! What a little stinker. Yeah, I got a good whiff of his magic scent yesterday. i heard that old fable before about a bird in the hand is worth two in the bush. this is a comical twist to that ideology and now, myth. Don't accidentally press his scent glands, or else! bet he packs a powerful wallop. BOO-terrific!
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2017
Pew! What a little stinker. Yeah, I got a good whiff of his magic scent yesterday. i heard that old fable before about a bird in the hand is worth two in the bush. this is a comical twist to that ideology and now, myth. Don't accidentally press his scent glands, or else! bet he packs a powerful wallop. BOO-terrific!
Comment Written 02-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2017
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Thanks, BOO.
Comment from Teri7
This is yet another very cute 5-7-5 about the tiny little skunk. You used very cute wording, but please don't throw it. It's so little and cute. I love the picture. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2017
This is yet another very cute 5-7-5 about the tiny little skunk. You used very cute wording, but please don't throw it. It's so little and cute. I love the picture. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 01-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2017
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Thanks, Teri
Comment from damommy
What a sweet baby. So tiny.
You wouldn't throw him if this was real, but it makes a good story. He's too small to do damage. 8-)
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2017
What a sweet baby. So tiny.
You wouldn't throw him if this was real, but it makes a good story. He's too small to do damage. 8-)
Comment Written 01-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2017
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At this age, I might consider having it de-scented and raising it like a cat.
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I was thinking the same thing. 8-)
Comment from frogbook
I LOVE THIS PICTURE. So sweet-please don't throw him! Clever and inventive poem in this entertaining series. Like the association to this famous saying sans the bird.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2017
I LOVE THIS PICTURE. So sweet-please don't throw him! Clever and inventive poem in this entertaining series. Like the association to this famous saying sans the bird.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2017
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Thank you, FB, for the super review. Bill
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Aww, he looks so cute! Isn't it tiny? It's got to be a newish born. I believe they only send out a nasty stink if they feel threatened. So I'd be careful if I was you! LOL.
Well done, an excellent 5-7-5 poem. Sandra x
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2017
Aww, he looks so cute! Isn't it tiny? It's got to be a newish born. I believe they only send out a nasty stink if they feel threatened. So I'd be careful if I was you! LOL.
Well done, an excellent 5-7-5 poem. Sandra x
Comment Written 01-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2017
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Thank you, Sandra.
Comment from rjuselius
lol. this is an entertaining piece of poetry dear bill! i do appreciate your humour as i love sarcasm. i think you have succeeded in making this poem funny.
thank you for sharing!
blessings and a big squeeze!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2017
lol. this is an entertaining piece of poetry dear bill! i do appreciate your humour as i love sarcasm. i think you have succeeded in making this poem funny.
thank you for sharing!
blessings and a big squeeze!
rebekka x
Comment Written 01-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2017
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Thanks, Rebekka, for the nice review. They're cute when they're young.
Comment from rspoet
Ah, the little stinker,
best to keep him at twenty arms distance
It may look cute now, but it is one foul creature
Excellent 5-7-5 poem in black and white
Interesting subject for a series of poems
A breath of fresh air
Well done
RS
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2017
Ah, the little stinker,
best to keep him at twenty arms distance
It may look cute now, but it is one foul creature
Excellent 5-7-5 poem in black and white
Interesting subject for a series of poems
A breath of fresh air
Well done
RS
Comment Written 01-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2017
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Thanks, RS, for the nice review. Bill
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Bill,
Of course I know you are being sarcastic & would never throw a baby skunk. Your poem is funny though. Good job with the syllable counts per line. I know these are listed as 5-7-5 poems, but yours seem to have more to them in the way of a complete thought or?? They are fun to read & don't try to make a 5-7-5 into a haiku 5-7-5.
Good job & thanks for sharing. Jan
The picture is great, too. The little skunk is so cute.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2017
Bill,
Of course I know you are being sarcastic & would never throw a baby skunk. Your poem is funny though. Good job with the syllable counts per line. I know these are listed as 5-7-5 poems, but yours seem to have more to them in the way of a complete thought or?? They are fun to read & don't try to make a 5-7-5 into a haiku 5-7-5.
Good job & thanks for sharing. Jan
The picture is great, too. The little skunk is so cute.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2017
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Thank you, Jan. No, I'd never throw a cute, baby skunk.