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Viewing comments for Chapter 60 "Skunk World 2"Animal poetry and short stories
15 total reviews
Comment from Nika2016
Love Stinks..Adam Sandler..You Tube...:)
Actually a sweet poem...
I have found skunks have a variation of odors matching emotions...The happy odor is not unpleasant. ..but has a licorice scent. ..I live near a forest ,...They do not really fear people, but will come up to them...a baby tried to play with my dog...bad juju...
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2017
Love Stinks..Adam Sandler..You Tube...:)
Actually a sweet poem...
I have found skunks have a variation of odors matching emotions...The happy odor is not unpleasant. ..but has a licorice scent. ..I live near a forest ,...They do not really fear people, but will come up to them...a baby tried to play with my dog...bad juju...
Comment Written 02-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2017
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Thanks, Nika, for giving this a look. Bill
Comment from schatzling
This is absolutely ODORable. The words you used just ignite and brings forth what you are saying so poetically. The art goes perfectly with your writing. I am truly honored you selected it. Thank you so very much.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2017
This is absolutely ODORable. The words you used just ignite and brings forth what you are saying so poetically. The art goes perfectly with your writing. I am truly honored you selected it. Thank you so very much.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2017
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Thanks for checking it out, and for the cool image.
Comment from Ulla
Hahahahahaha, you do make me laugh, Bill. This is absolutely adoring. I positively love it. Your picture just add to the whole thing. All the best. Ulla:))
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2017
Hahahahahaha, you do make me laugh, Bill. This is absolutely adoring. I positively love it. Your picture just add to the whole thing. All the best. Ulla:))
Comment Written 01-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2017
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Thanks, Ulla
Comment from Teri7
Now this is more up my alley! They are pretty animals, but boy do they stink! You used very good descriptive wording and I love the imagery. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2017
Now this is more up my alley! They are pretty animals, but boy do they stink! You used very good descriptive wording and I love the imagery. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 31-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2017
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Thanks, Teri
Comment from Irish Rain
Ha ha...those little stinkers!! Love this tiny little delight. And the picture is quite wonderful too. Made my evening happy!! Blessings....
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017
Ha ha...those little stinkers!! Love this tiny little delight. And the picture is quite wonderful too. Made my evening happy!! Blessings....
Comment Written 31-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017
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Thank you, IR, for the excellent review. Bill
Comment from marybell1
I enjoyed reading your 5-7-5 poem "Skunk world 2". You followed all the rules for this genre and I loved your choice of picture.
All the best.
Marybell1.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017
I enjoyed reading your 5-7-5 poem "Skunk world 2". You followed all the rules for this genre and I loved your choice of picture.
All the best.
Marybell1.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017
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Thank you, marybell, for the excellent review. Bill
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You are most welcome.
Marybell1.
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes my friend thesis well written I like the way you used nose and knows so cleverly love the art choice and you made me smile well done regards Jill
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017
Yes my friend thesis well written I like the way you used nose and knows so cleverly love the art choice and you made me smile well done regards Jill
Comment Written 31-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017
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Thanks, Jill, for the great review. Bill
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about how skunks enjoy their world of wisdom. Their noses are very good to smell the love in the air. There are many lovers who make love stinks.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about how skunks enjoy their world of wisdom. Their noses are very good to smell the love in the air. There are many lovers who make love stinks.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017
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Thank you, Sandra, for the excellent review. Bill
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Bill,
This is a great presentation--the colors, the art, & the message. I like nose/knows. Skunks are really misunderstood. I once saw a mother skunk & 3 babies trying to cross a busy highway in the mountains. They were really cute--they all made it across. Thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017
Bill,
This is a great presentation--the colors, the art, & the message. I like nose/knows. Skunks are really misunderstood. I once saw a mother skunk & 3 babies trying to cross a busy highway in the mountains. They were really cute--they all made it across. Thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 31-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017
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Thank you, Jan, for the excellent review. Bill
Comment from damommy
Awww, I remember Pepi Le Pew. He was always after the wrong girl, the cat. Good choice of pictures.
Cute play on words. 8-)
So, the scene along the highway may be two loving skunks? I like that thought.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017
Awww, I remember Pepi Le Pew. He was always after the wrong girl, the cat. Good choice of pictures.
Cute play on words. 8-)
So, the scene along the highway may be two loving skunks? I like that thought.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017
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Thank you, da, for the excellent review. Bill