Still Time
A time still to enjoy the outdoors4 total reviews
Comment from ragerde
Your poem is full of fall images, looks toward winter and back to the last gasps of summer (barbecues). You cover the effects on flora, fauna and humankind in you inimitable poetic style. Good job!
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2017
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Your poem is full of fall images, looks toward winter and back to the last gasps of summer (barbecues). You cover the effects on flora, fauna and humankind in you inimitable poetic style. Good job!
Comment Written 02-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2017
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Thank you for the read and the comments.
Comment from smileycloud
very good form
a really fine combination of imagery and picturesque words and phrases
really like;-
"Jack Frost applying careful brush strokes"
good luck in the contest
have a smiley day
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2017
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very good form
a really fine combination of imagery and picturesque words and phrases
really like;-
"Jack Frost applying careful brush strokes"
good luck in the contest
have a smiley day
Comment Written 02-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2017
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Thank you for your read and your encouraging words.
Comment from RodG
I really like the picture chosen as it truly frames the scene you write about. Where I live, though, it is illegal to burn leaves.
Nice personification of Jack Frost as an artist.
All your rhymes are well chosen.
And as your title reminds us on this holiday weekend, there's "still time" to enjoy the outdoors.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017
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I really like the picture chosen as it truly frames the scene you write about. Where I live, though, it is illegal to burn leaves.
Nice personification of Jack Frost as an artist.
All your rhymes are well chosen.
And as your title reminds us on this holiday weekend, there's "still time" to enjoy the outdoors.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017
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Sadly, leaf burning is no longer allowed in our area either. I miss that pungent smell of fall. Thanks you for your read and your comments.
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent poem and entry for the contest
that meets all the elements of the prompt
Excellent descriptive imagery of autumn
and fine rhymes in threes
Good choice of photograph
Autumn is a wonderful season, if only it wasn't followed by winter
Best wishes in the voting
RS
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017
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This is an excellent poem and entry for the contest
that meets all the elements of the prompt
Excellent descriptive imagery of autumn
and fine rhymes in threes
Good choice of photograph
Autumn is a wonderful season, if only it wasn't followed by winter
Best wishes in the voting
RS
Comment Written 31-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017
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Yes, your sentiment is shared by me. Thanks for the read and the kind words.
