Horses and dogs
A Nonet about horses and dogs6 total reviews
Comment from c_lucas
Horses like stable mates. I have heard about one having a chicken. The most popular is a dog. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2017
Horses like stable mates. I have heard about one having a chicken. The most popular is a dog. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good last part of the week.
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You're welcome.
Comment from misstory9197
This is a good start. You have succinctly described your long-standing affection for dogs and horses with your early experiences. One more line with six syllables and you will have a completed nonet poem. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2017
This is a good start. You have succinctly described your long-standing affection for dogs and horses with your early experiences. One more line with six syllables and you will have a completed nonet poem. Best wishes.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2017
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Thank,Ine
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Nonet poem about your love for animals. Horses and dogs don't always work well together. When they grow up with each other they will get along better.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2017
A very well-written Nonet poem about your love for animals. Horses and dogs don't always work well together. When they grow up with each other they will get along better.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good last part of the week.
Comment from sunnilicious
Enjoyable nonet to read. It is relatable to readers even non-pet owners. Well thought out and clearly written. Nice ending, we do all love our animals. Great artwork choice. Good luck in the contest :)
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2017
Enjoyable nonet to read. It is relatable to readers even non-pet owners. Well thought out and clearly written. Nice ending, we do all love our animals. Great artwork choice. Good luck in the contest :)
Comment Written 29-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good last part of the week.
Comment from nbonner
I love dogs-actually my favorite animal. I have three dogs which I love very dearly. I thought this was a great Nonet poem. Thank you for sharing and best wishes in the contest
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2017
I love dogs-actually my favorite animal. I have three dogs which I love very dearly. I thought this was a great Nonet poem. Thank you for sharing and best wishes in the contest
Comment Written 29-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good last part of the week.
Comment from frierajac
Colorful and the last line is a winner. Although your nonet doesn't fit the format of the rule in the writing prompt. That makes it difficult for the reviewer to give a better#
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2017
Colorful and the last line is a winner. Although your nonet doesn't fit the format of the rule in the writing prompt. That makes it difficult for the reviewer to give a better#
Comment Written 29-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good last part of the week.