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Yon's the one

My word choice

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Comment from pome lover
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hooray for old fashioned. and dinosaurs.
Yon is a good word, short and precise - worth bringing back to life.
well, I just looked it up on Google and it's not so precise. There are several meanings. Ones says it means "that" or "there"; another says it means "he" or "she" - I don't get that one. Another, yonder.
At any rate, it's a good word and a good poem.
well done.
pome lover

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2017


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Comment from lyenochka
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Very cute! I like "yon" also as it works well for a monosyllable in a number of poems. I don't think it makes you a dinosaur but a poet. I just always thought of it as a shorter form of yonder.

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2017


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    Thanks.
Comment from F. Wehr3
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Funny it made me think immediately of over yonder, and when I looked up the definition, yonder was used to describe Yon. Nice job!

Good luck in the contest,
Russell

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 29-Aug-2017
    Thanks a lot.
Comment from Deniz22
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Very cute...but then I speak old dinosaur. I really do like your little poem and it makes me wonder if it's a shortened version of yonder? Good work!

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 29-Aug-2017
    6 stars, wow, didn't expect that.
    Thanks Deniz22
    From this British ex-pat.😄
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Comment from giraffmang
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Hi there,

Nice choice of word. Also used to be one of my favourites. Good neat little verse too.

It means...It's over there. - it also means 'that one'

Middle English too which is so much more poetic than modern wordage.


 Comment Written 29-Aug-2017


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    Thanks a lot
Comment from apky
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Yes, yon is a good one, and like you say,
one word that don't fit in any meanings for
Twitter and Facebook. I was thinking of
saving the word I got from my Mum - deuce -
but my Grandmum had an even better one -
Fiddlesticks!

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 29-Aug-2017
    Thanks Apky for your comments.