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Crap hat

A poem about a word that ii like to save

8 total reviews 
Comment from sunnilicious
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Crap hat, pouty mouths... The military has a bunch of images to uphold. I'm not sure what to think. It use to be like 4 years and soldiers are happy to be out. But I've heard too many stories in California about soldiers making it a lifetime career choice especially because of the war. I don't know what it means. And I found out from another FanStorian that there are more liberal changes in the works. Good work on a crappy situations.

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 29-Aug-2017
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.
Comment from MizKat
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Hi robina,

This is the first time I've heard to save a word.
Or else I've just forgotten as I'm very forgetful now.
I guess all of the people can think whatever they want to.
I've never heard of a Crap hat before although I've heard of crap.
(I'm just being silly)

Kat

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 28-Aug-2017
    Thanks for the kind review. Have a lovely week.
reply by MizKat on 29-Aug-2017
    I hope that it will be a lovely week. It looks like it will be cold and raining though.
Comment from c_lucas
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Slang has always been inundated in our language and has changed over time. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 28-Aug-2017
    Thanks for the kind review. Have a lovely week.
reply by c_lucas on 28-Aug-2017
    You're welcome, Ine. Charlie
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
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yes my friend this is well written i wasnt aware there was a contest to save a word this is a fascination poem good luck in the contest regards jill

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 28-Aug-2017
    Thanks for the kind review. Have a lovely week.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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That was a good one, Ine, we are definitely losing a lot of our words, mostly because of tweets and text messages, they have a language of their own. well done my friend, this is a great entry. Good luck! :) Sandra x

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 28-Aug-2017
    Thanks for the kind review. Have a lovely week.
Comment from EverInParadise
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A very interesting entry and an old word saved from disappearing. I didn't know and since it is a European military this is a good lesson in many ways. I hope this does well in the contest.

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 28-Aug-2017
    Thanks for the kind review. Have a lovely week.
Comment from Bill Schott
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This poem, Crap Hat, gives the reader a little insight into the terminology of some f the armed forces around the world. Crap hat is a term I'll need to bring up when I see any special forces friends.

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 28-Aug-2017
    Thanks for the kind review. Have a lovely week.
Comment from patcelaw
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This is an interesting post. I think all languages have some words that are slowly being put into the swap of words we use. We in America have some our own idioms which too are slipping away, Patricia

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 28-Aug-2017
    Thanks for the kind review. Have a lovely week.