Comment from nomi338

Excellent

That is a game that would not last for very long because man would cheat and resort to one or more of his weapons of destruction and would ultimately blast those moles to hell and beyond. Man has always changed the topography of the playing field so that he always has and maintains the advantage.

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Aug-2017

Thanks, nomi

Comment from frogbook

Excellent

Quite frightening...but sickly funny also-LOL. Great imagination as always and you found a picture to support your theory-haha. Great job.

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Aug-2017

Thanks, FB

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Good one. The whack-a-moles finally turn the tables on the dudes. The image is quite something ~ humorous. A fun 5-7-5 to add to the mole theme in your book. Marilyn

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017

Thanks, Marilyn.

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Oh my friend this is so funny whack a dude moles getting there own back for what is done to them well done I enjoyed regards Jill

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2017

Thanks, Jill

Comment from kiwigirl2821

Excellent

Oh bill this one made me laugh. You know that whack a thing is the only game I have any luck with at the carnival. But, "Whack-a-dude"!! hahaha perfect! xoxo deborah

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2017

Thanks, kiwi

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

lol This is just too cute. A very funny 5-7-5 poem you have penned. You used very cute descriptive wording and a very cute picture. Makes me think of the carnival where we used to play whack a mole! Blessings, teri

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Aug-2017

Thanks, Teri

Comment from Mitchell Brontė

Excellent

Ha ha, I'm imagining this Bill, a scary thought.....another wonderful trip into your world of moles .....loved it......whack a dude...made me laugh
Mitchell

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Aug-2017

Thanks. Mitchell

Comment from damommy

Excellent

Finally, justice for moles. lol

What a cute idea. The picture is perfect for this.

Let's just hope that animals never take over. A lot of people have a lot to answer for.

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Aug-2017

Thanks, da

Comment from Poetic Friend

Excellent

Ah, the tables are turned. Those digital moles were tired of being whacked. lol

This poem begs for a sequel. I hope you plan to write one. One can only imagine once he turns around and sees those giant moles.

Obviously, the artwork must accompany the poem.

Good job!

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Aug-2017

Thanks, PF

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

There are such a thing
As large moles
But they are interested
in roots, not clubs
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This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Aug-2017

Thanks, Charlie

reply by c_lucas on 25-Aug-2017

You're welcome, Bill. Charlie