Autumn Thoughts
A contest entry12 total reviews
Comment from EverInParadise
Congratulations on winning this contest. I was the creator of this idea and hoped writers would find it a bit of a challenge. You did so well.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2017
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Congratulations on winning this contest. I was the creator of this idea and hoped writers would find it a bit of a challenge. You did so well.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2017
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Thanks SO much. This was a wonderful idea you had and was a great challenge. Enjoyable thinking about this lovely seasons assets and heading into the old winter. I am so pleased that you liked the poem.
Comment from dovemarie
Dear frogbook, Wonderful poem about your thoughts of autumn. Congratulations on your first-place finish. I liked the picture, and your form and style of poetry. The background and the color of the wording was just right too. Dove
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2017
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Dear frogbook, Wonderful poem about your thoughts of autumn. Congratulations on your first-place finish. I liked the picture, and your form and style of poetry. The background and the color of the wording was just right too. Dove
Comment Written 12-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2017
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Thanks so much for your very kind words as well as that wonderful froggy green star-my very favorite color! Truly appreciated.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A great description of the transition from summer to autumn and the delights of both the seasons, a delightful record of your favourite season and I wish you luck with contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2017
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A great description of the transition from summer to autumn and the delights of both the seasons, a delightful record of your favourite season and I wish you luck with contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2017
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Thanks so much.
Comment from smileycloud
great work
I like the presentation very much indeed
The vivid representation of the season is exceptional
I love the autumn colour of the script
if I could pick a favourite I would say perhaps;-
"a riot of blazing beauty cradles the hillside."
how breathtaking is that line of poetry
good luck in the contest
though I doubt very much luck will have anything to do with it
have a smiley day
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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great work
I like the presentation very much indeed
The vivid representation of the season is exceptional
I love the autumn colour of the script
if I could pick a favourite I would say perhaps;-
"a riot of blazing beauty cradles the hillside."
how breathtaking is that line of poetry
good luck in the contest
though I doubt very much luck will have anything to do with it
have a smiley day
Comment Written 06-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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Thanks so much for you kind review and my favorite green star! Truly appreciated.
Comment from Irish Rain
I LOVE this. No colors mentioned, but a riot of color in each verse. My favorite season too, you've described it well. LOVE that gorgeous picture!!! Great entry, blessings..
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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I LOVE this. No colors mentioned, but a riot of color in each verse. My favorite season too, you've described it well. LOVE that gorgeous picture!!! Great entry, blessings..
Comment Written 05-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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Thanks so much! I am so pleased you liked it and I am truly appreciative of my favorite green star.
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You're most welcome!!!
Comment from jenintorre
I found this Poem beautifully written and set out with the enchanting picture. Very atmospheric. I wish you lots of luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2017
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I found this Poem beautifully written and set out with the enchanting picture. Very atmospheric. I wish you lots of luck in the competition.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2017
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Could you let me know what I can do to improve since you gave me the worst rating of 1? Thanks for any suggestions. From your words sounded like you liked it.
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So sorry, I thought I'd given you 5. I don't know how that happened' I loved it.
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Thanks, I'm glad it was just a mistake. I hate to ask but would u mind going in to change it as it takes away my 6's. Greatly appreciated but not a huge deal if u don't have time.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about autumn that we meet with mixed thoughts and emotions. We are glad the heat of summer is over but we dread the arrival of winter. It seems the seasons change quicker every year.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2017
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A very well-written poem about autumn that we meet with mixed thoughts and emotions. We are glad the heat of summer is over but we dread the arrival of winter. It seems the seasons change quicker every year.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2017
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So true. Thanks so much for reading and your thoughtful comments.
Comment from B.B. Rose
You did a fine job of expressing a mixed response to autumn...I felt like you understood my own joy and sorrow at this particular change of seasons. The only tiny suggestion I offer you would be in your line using "juxtaposition." I saw it as capturing the perfect expression of your theme. Perhaps you might consider emphasizing even more by moving it up and making it part of your opening line. Crazy? Dunno, but think about it a bit. A delightful poem.
B.B. Rose
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2017
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You did a fine job of expressing a mixed response to autumn...I felt like you understood my own joy and sorrow at this particular change of seasons. The only tiny suggestion I offer you would be in your line using "juxtaposition." I saw it as capturing the perfect expression of your theme. Perhaps you might consider emphasizing even more by moving it up and making it part of your opening line. Crazy? Dunno, but think about it a bit. A delightful poem.
B.B. Rose
Comment Written 05-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2017
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Thanks for the suggestion. I will take a look. Much appreciate your read and review.
Comment from c_lucas
Autumn says good bye to Summer and hello to Winter. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a colorful read. There is very good imagery.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2017
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Autumn says good bye to Summer and hello to Winter. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a colorful read. There is very good imagery.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2017
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Thanks so much for reading and the thoughtful review.
Comment from Auto-Manic
Loved this. I think it was the roasting chili's that got me. Maybe the football games, but on any level, yup that's fall.
You get a scary six for that. Loved the photo
AM
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2017
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Loved this. I think it was the roasting chili's that got me. Maybe the football games, but on any level, yup that's fall.
You get a scary six for that. Loved the photo
AM
Comment Written 05-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2017
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Ah, thanks so much! I live in Pueblo, Colorado and we have a Chili Festival here for our famous Pueblo Chilis so I always have that perception of fall among the others. Truly appreciate the kind review.
