Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Talk about knocking down the fourth wall. It can get dicey when your fantasy writing threatens the old lady. You might want to sleep with one eye open, at least until she gets over your threatening her with a file. LOL.

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2017

Good point, nomi.

Comment from trimple

Excellent

Hello there, Bill

I do enjoy a bit of bonkers late at night :)

This pope/mole shenanigan is made all the more fun as I read on and presume that wifey is best pleased with said dream...

Kind regards

tracey :)

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017

Thanks, Tracey

reply by trimple on 23-Aug-2017

:)

Comment from sunnilicious

Excellent

You are very creative. This was an interesting poem. Good visual imagery. Nice details. Good rhythm and rhymes. Carefree and fun. It made me laugh. Nice work.

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017

Thanks, sunnilicious

Comment from Cass Carlton

Excellent

Dear Bill, Your obsession with blind tunnel diggers is amusing, my friend. The Mole seems to be your bosom companion of late. He certainly chooses illustrious company . The Pope no less. But, you know even the characters in nonsense rhymes have a way of dictating what they'll do. don't they? That's probably why they wouldn't go in the direction you wanted. Perhaps if you had wanted them to go through the hill or under it?? Anyway, a fun read, and definitely up to your usual standard . Well done cheers Cass

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017

Thanks, Cass. I should have sent that knife-wielding mole THROUGH that hill. Of course! Thank you.

Comment from BOO ghost

Excellent

Mole world. Everything appears green. Where is the leprechaun and me pot of gold? BOO's favorite verse: A mole dressed in taupe with a noose-knotted rope

meets up with the Pope on a slippery slope;

both have a hope that they can co-cope,

not look like a dope when fate deals a 'Nope'.
Good going, mate! BOO-tastic!

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017

Thanks, BOO

Comment from damommy

Excellent

LOL. I like it. It made me laugh.

The rhyming is terrific.

How funny, the mole meeting the Pope.

Keep 'em coming'.

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017

Thanks, da