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Comment from nbonner
That would be a terrible, horrifying sight to see. I have nightmares about people zombies all the time so to see an animal (moles) become a zombie would scare me to death, Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2017
That would be a terrible, horrifying sight to see. I have nightmares about people zombies all the time so to see an animal (moles) become a zombie would scare me to death, Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 22-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2017
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Thanks, n
Comment from Ulla
Hahahahaha, Bill, it's hilarious. You are indeed dangerous. Poor mole being exposed to your kind! Wonderful poem. A joy to read. All the best. Ulla:))
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2017
Hahahahaha, Bill, it's hilarious. You are indeed dangerous. Poor mole being exposed to your kind! Wonderful poem. A joy to read. All the best. Ulla:))
Comment Written 21-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2017
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Thanks, Ulla
Comment from nomi338
Ha ha. All that I can say is good riddance to bad rubbish. I know that I should feel terrible about having such a lack of compassion for one of God's creatures, but, a pest is a pest, is a pest. I will say one good thing for him though. He is gone, good.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2017
Ha ha. All that I can say is good riddance to bad rubbish. I know that I should feel terrible about having such a lack of compassion for one of God's creatures, but, a pest is a pest, is a pest. I will say one good thing for him though. He is gone, good.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2017
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Moles gotta go.
Comment from Irish Rain
Had to laugh....but it reality...I'd be horrified, because I'm a softy wimp, ha ha. This is another entertaining cute verse!! Enjoyed this, blessings...
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
Had to laugh....but it reality...I'd be horrified, because I'm a softy wimp, ha ha. This is another entertaining cute verse!! Enjoyed this, blessings...
Comment Written 20-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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Thank you, IR, for the great review. Bill
Comment from Hitcher
ha ha, this one is a bit out there Bill, it definitely made me smile friend, the visuals of your zombie mole being chipped onto your neighbor's roof were great, of course then the mind want's to know what would have happened next. I had it climbing down the chimney and out of the fire bow[not on of course ) and frightening the sh#it out of his neighbor, his family and his cats : )
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
ha ha, this one is a bit out there Bill, it definitely made me smile friend, the visuals of your zombie mole being chipped onto your neighbor's roof were great, of course then the mind want's to know what would have happened next. I had it climbing down the chimney and out of the fire bow[not on of course ) and frightening the sh#it out of his neighbor, his family and his cats : )
Comment Written 20-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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Thanks, Hitch, find reviewing this. At least if was half dead.
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes my friend this is well written and a fun poem about moles an undid zombie mole who'd have thought well done regards Jill
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
Yes my friend this is well written and a fun poem about moles an undid zombie mole who'd have thought well done regards Jill
Comment Written 20-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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Thank you, Mrs P, for giving this a look. Bill
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
LOL, those moles can be such a nuisance when they come into the garden and channel their homes out. Not happy with just one, they create holes all over the lawn! Did the poem come first or the picture? It is so funny, I don't think the neighbour would laugh though! LOL! Loved the poem, Bill, about zombie moles. :) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
LOL, those moles can be such a nuisance when they come into the garden and channel their homes out. Not happy with just one, they create holes all over the lawn! Did the poem come first or the picture? It is so funny, I don't think the neighbour would laugh though! LOL! Loved the poem, Bill, about zombie moles. :) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 20-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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Thanks, Sandra, for the great review. Bill
Comment from marybell1
I enjoyed reading your poem "Mole World 5". You rhymed it well. Just a wee suggestion so that you are not put in the naughty corner - 'In no way could I be sad'.
All the best.
Marybell1.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
I enjoyed reading your poem "Mole World 5". You rhymed it well. Just a wee suggestion so that you are not put in the naughty corner - 'In no way could I be sad'.
All the best.
Marybell1.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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Thanks, Marybell, for the great review. Bill
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You are most welcome.
Marybell1.
Comment from Pullmanspb
You have successfully put moles in their place. I know they must have a place in the world, I hate it, though, when they choose my yard or garden.
Hope you parred the hole.
Steven
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
You have successfully put moles in their place. I know they must have a place in the world, I hate it, though, when they choose my yard or garden.
Hope you parred the hole.
Steven
Comment Written 20-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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Thanks, Steven, for the great review. Bill
Comment from Spitfire
This is so cute and creepy. Can the mole regrow it self? Your splat made sure he couldn't. LOL
What kind of soulless, sinful force/ could animate this mole?
You manage to turn this into horror story.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
This is so cute and creepy. Can the mole regrow it self? Your splat made sure he couldn't. LOL
What kind of soulless, sinful force/ could animate this mole?
You manage to turn this into horror story.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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Thanks, Shari, for the great review. Bill