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Animal poetry and short stories

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Comment from nbonner
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That would be a terrible, horrifying sight to see. I have nightmares about people zombies all the time so to see an animal (moles) become a zombie would scare me to death, Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 22-Aug-2017
    Thanks, n
Comment from Ulla
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Hahahahaha, Bill, it's hilarious. You are indeed dangerous. Poor mole being exposed to your kind! Wonderful poem. A joy to read. All the best. Ulla:))

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 21-Aug-2017
    Thanks, Ulla
Comment from nomi338
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Ha ha. All that I can say is good riddance to bad rubbish. I know that I should feel terrible about having such a lack of compassion for one of God's creatures, but, a pest is a pest, is a pest. I will say one good thing for him though. He is gone, good.

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 21-Aug-2017
    Moles gotta go.
Comment from Irish Rain
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Had to laugh....but it reality...I'd be horrified, because I'm a softy wimp, ha ha. This is another entertaining cute verse!! Enjoyed this, blessings...

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
    Thank you, IR, for the great review. Bill
Comment from Hitcher
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ha ha, this one is a bit out there Bill, it definitely made me smile friend, the visuals of your zombie mole being chipped onto your neighbor's roof were great, of course then the mind want's to know what would have happened next. I had it climbing down the chimney and out of the fire bow[not on of course ) and frightening the sh#it out of his neighbor, his family and his cats : )

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
    Thanks, Hitch, find reviewing this. At least if was half dead.
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
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Yes my friend this is well written and a fun poem about moles an undid zombie mole who'd have thought well done regards Jill

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
    Thank you, Mrs P, for giving this a look. Bill
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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LOL, those moles can be such a nuisance when they come into the garden and channel their homes out. Not happy with just one, they create holes all over the lawn! Did the poem come first or the picture? It is so funny, I don't think the neighbour would laugh though! LOL! Loved the poem, Bill, about zombie moles. :) Sandra xxx

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
    Thanks, Sandra, for the great review. Bill
Comment from marybell1
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I enjoyed reading your poem "Mole World 5". You rhymed it well. Just a wee suggestion so that you are not put in the naughty corner - 'In no way could I be sad'.
All the best.
Marybell1.

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
    Thanks, Marybell, for the great review. Bill
reply by marybell1 on 22-Aug-2017
    You are most welcome.
    Marybell1.
Comment from Pullmanspb
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You have successfully put moles in their place. I know they must have a place in the world, I hate it, though, when they choose my yard or garden.

Hope you parred the hole.

Steven

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
    Thanks, Steven, for the great review. Bill
Comment from Spitfire
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This is so cute and creepy. Can the mole regrow it self? Your splat made sure he couldn't. LOL
What kind of soulless, sinful force/ could animate this mole?
You manage to turn this into horror story.

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
    Thanks, Shari, for the great review. Bill