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Lost at Sea

5-7-5 contest entry

3 total reviews 
Comment from ragerde
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This is an excellent poetic parable of what happens when we lose our moral compass. We only sabotage our own future. One misstep can lead us into a cesspool of degradation.

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2017

reply by the author on 18-Aug-2017
    Sad, but true. Tried to convey those thoughts in a few short lines. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very good 5-7-5 you have penned for the lost writing prompt. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with the art work. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2017

reply by the author on 17-Aug-2017
    Thank you!
Comment from Curly Girly
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This is an exceptionally appealing verse:
Words cannot describe
the pain in his little heart
Lost without his friend
The image tears the heart strings.
Best wishes.

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2017

reply by the author on 17-Aug-2017
    Thank you!